[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated version of draft Initial Report

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear Marylyn,


Yes but we need to look that final draft before being published.

There are some required edits e.g. line 53on page 3 , it says This report
sets out the core issues* the* that….

This “the “should be suppressed

Regards

Kavouss


On Mon, Sep 24, 2018 at 3:28 PM Marilyn Cade <marilynscade at hotmail.com>
wrote:

> I hope we can move forward with Oct 4, as we need to publish our Initial
> Report.
> ------------------------------
> *From:* Ccwg-auctionproceeds <ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces at icann.org> on
> behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
> *Sent:* Thursday, September 20, 2018 7:16 PM
> *To:* ccwg-auctionproceeds at icann.org
> *Subject:* [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated version of
> draft Initial Report
>
>
> Dear All,
>
>
>
> Following today’s new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG meeting, please find
> attached an updated version of the draft Initial Report in which updates
> have been made (in redline) to reflect the deliberations and agreement on
> how to move forward on the outstanding items that were identified. In
> addition, staff has added language for the executive summary, based on the
> current contents of the report. To facilitate your review, previous
> redlines were accepted (for those wanting to review the previous version,
> please see https://community.icann.org/x/twiNBQ
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> Please share with the mailing list* by Monday 1 October at the latest*
> whether there are any further issues or edits that need to be discussed.
> Based on the feedback received, the leadership team will decide whether or
> not to go ahead with the meeting on 4 October. As a reminder, the objective
> is to publish the Initial Report for public comment by 8 October at the
> latest.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Emily, Joke and Marika
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>
>
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