[council] Revised Motion on Drafting Team/Empowerment

[Paul McGrady]

Avri,

Thank you for this very friendly amendment!  I appreciate your help
improving this motion.

Best,
Paul



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From: owner-council at gnso.icann.org [mailto:owner-council at gnso.icann.org] On
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Sent: Tuesday, June 28, 2016 10:46 PM
To: council at gnso.icann.org
Subject: Re: [council] Revised Motion on Drafting Team/Empowerment


Hi,

In terms of the changes, I find it problematic that is still refers solely
to modifying bylaws.  I think most of the work will involve modifying
operating procedures and thus the council should consider the following
ammendment:

> 2. The Drafting Team shall comprise those volunteers from the GNSO 
> community which are identified by their Constituencies and Stakeholder 
> Groups who express interests and can demonstrate reasonable knowledge 
> of or experience with the process of revising the ICANN Bylaws.
> Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups are requested to identify 
> volunteers by letter to the GNSCO Council Chair by 22 July 2016.

to

2. The Drafting Team shall comprise those volunteers from the GNSO community
which are identified by their Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups who
express interests and can demonstrate reasonable knowledge of or experience
with the process of revising the ICANN Bylaws _or GNSO operating
procedures_.  Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups are requested to
identify volunteers by letter to the GNSCO Council Chair by
22 July 2016.

avri

On 29-Jun-16 00:00, Paul McGrady wrote:
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> Hi All,
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> Attached is a revised version (with track changes) of my motion which 
> we discussed on Monday.  Thank you all for your input into improving 
> this.  I look forward to discussing the revised version with you all soon.
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> Best,
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> Paul
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> Paul McGrady
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> policy at paulmcgrady.com <mailto:policy at paulmcgrady.com>
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