[council] Comments on the draft EPDP Charter

[Stephanie Perrin]

Thanks Rubens, I did note the explanation of picket fence above, but it 
is insufficient.  Would suggest perhaps a footnote that goes into detail 
with e.g. reference to sample clauses, positioning in the text perhaps 
better at first introduction.

SP

On 2018-06-28 12:35, Rubens Kuhl wrote:
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> Stephanie,
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> I added some replies to your text.
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> Rubens
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>> On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:11, Stephanie Perrin 
>> <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca 
>> <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
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>> I have made extensive comments to the document.
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>> Stephanie Perrin
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>> <edits SP draft 
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