[council] [Ext] Re: FINAL COMMENT REQUEST -- Draft RPM Charter Addendum -- Deadline of 22:00 UTC 1 October 2019

Tue Oct 1 03:34:27 UTC 2019

Hi Steve,

Thanks for the new version.
I am sharing some comments:

   - under section 4 ,"(i) The IGO Work Track must publish its initial
   recommendations for public comment prior to delivering its final
   recommendations to the full RPM Working Group;", it seems that RPM WG won't
   get the initial report and only have a say for final recommendations. When
   reading the points iv to vii, the RPM WG doesn't seems be able to have any
   substantial influence. I am not sure that aligned with how WT5 is
   functioning or supposed to.
   - for reporting, I think the IGO track chair is accountable to GNSO
   council regarding the reporting. They can interact with other SO/AC and
   their leadership if necessary but we need to be clear to whom they are are
   supposed to report and respond in first place. this track is not a CCWG. I
   ask to remove that part.
   - for membership, it seems with the current wording "Up to 2 Members
   from each interested SO and AC. Up to 2 Members appointed by and
   representing IGOs." that GAC will be represented twice. By the recurring
   engagement with GAC, we can understand this narrow topic interest mainly
   IGO who are members/observers in the GAC. I suggest that GAC only get to
   appoint up to 2 reps and from IGO.

Best,

Rafik

Le mar. 1 oct. 2019 à 03:51, Steve Chan <steve.chan at icann.org> a écrit :

> Hi Elsa, all,
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> Sure, attached now.
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> Best,
>
> Steve
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> *From: *Elsa S <elsa.saade at gmail.com>
> *Date: *Monday, September 30, 2019 at 11:09 AM
> *To: *Steve Chan <steve.chan at icann.org>
> *Cc: *"Drazek, Keith" <kdrazek at verisign.com>, "council at gnso.icann.org" <
> council at gnso.icann.org>, "gnso-secs at icann.org" <gnso-secs at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[Ext] Re: [council] FINAL COMMENT REQUEST -- Draft RPM Charter
> Addendum -- Deadline of 22:00 UTC 1 October 2019
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>
>
> Thanks a lot Steve! Could we kindly be sent the draft in Word Doc in order
> to add comments in a red lined version?
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> E.
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> On Mon, Sep 30, 2019 at 1:01 PM Steve Chan <steve.chan at icann.org> wrote:
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> Dear Councilors,
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>
> Per Keith’s email, staff has made just a couple of edits to try and
> integrate concerns raised during that call and as summarized by Keith. The
> updates are limited to page 3 and include:
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>    - Removing the paragraph that highlighted the possibility of new
>    policy recommendations superseding the original recommendations 1-4
>    - Added bullet (iii) under Deliverables and Reporting, which seeks to
>    ensure that the recommendation(s) are technically implementable.
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> If you have any additional comments or suggested edits, please submit them
> by *22:00 UTC on Tuesday, 1 October*, as noted by Keith.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Steve
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>
>
>
>
> *From: *council <council-bounces at gnso.icann.org> on behalf of "Drazek,
> Keith via council" <council at gnso.icann.org>
> *Reply-To: *"Drazek, Keith" <kdrazek at verisign.com>
> *Date: *Wednesday, September 25, 2019 at 6:32 AM
> *To: *"council at gnso.icann.org" <council at gnso.icann.org>
> *Cc: *"gnso-secs at icann.org" <gnso-secs at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[council] FINAL COMMENT REQUEST -- Draft RPM Charter Addendum
> -- Deadline of 22:00 UTC 1 October 2019
>
>
>
> Hi all,
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>
> Following up our Council discussion last Thursday, if anyone has further
> comments or suggested edits to the draft RPM Charter addendum, please send
> them to the list by 22:00 UTC on Tuesday, 1 October.
>
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>
> To summarize comments to date, during the Council call, we agreed to
> remove or significantly amend the paragraph referencing Recs 1-4, and to
> include language suggested by Maxim related to expertise of participants.
>
>
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> As discussed, this draft has been available for review and comment since 9
> September, and we need to move it forward. Our target is to have this
> addendum ready for Council approval in Montreal, so your timely attention
> is appreciated.
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> Once we have a stable draft, I will share it with GAC leadership and IGOs
> to seek preliminary feedback prior to our 24 October Council meeting.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Keith
>
>
>
> *From:* council <council-bounces at gnso.icann.org> *On Behalf Of *Mary Wong
> *Sent:* Monday, September 09, 2019 8:58 PM
> *To:* council at gnso.icann.org
> *Subject:* [EXTERNAL] [council] FOR DISCUSSION ONLY: Draft Addendum to
> RPM Charter
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>
>
> SENT ON BEHALF OF PAUL MCGRADY
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> Dear Councilors,
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>
> On behalf of Paul McGrady, who led the small team effort along with Martin
> Silva Valent and Elsa Saad to develop a draft amendment to the current
> Review of All Rights Protection Mechanisms (RPMs) PDP Working Group
> Charter, please find attached a proposed draft Addendum to the RPM Charter
> for your review and discussion on the upcoming Council call. The document
> has also been reviewed by Petter Rindforth, the Chair of the IGO-INGO
> Curative Rights PDP Working Group. You will see some comments and
> yellow-highlighted text of some provisions that the Council may wish to
> discuss.
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> Based on the small team’s understanding and the informal discussion that
> was held in Marrakech between several GNSO Councilors, GAC and IGO
> representatives, this draft document will also be sent to GAC leadership
> for their feedback, with the expectation that a final version can be voted
> on by the GNSO Council by/in Montreal.
>
>
>
> Thanks and cheers
>
> Mary & Steve (on behalf of Paul)
>
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