<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Hello Nathalie,<br><br>Thank you for these draft minutes and please find following my comments on the same.<br><br>Re: item 4 on SSAD ODA</div><div dir="ltr">1. Pg 3, 1st para, line 3: "The small team found a number of accuracies and errors of interpretation." - shouldn't "accuracies" be "inaccuracies"? <br>2. Pg 3, last para, line 2: "SAD" should be "SSAD"<br><br>Re: item 5 on DNS Abuse<br>3. Pg 5, the largest para: there are a bunch of misplaced or redundant commas which I will leave you to review/correct, but more importantly, the last sentence, I doubt that Paul McGrady "added that the aim will be to <u>direct</u> the GNSO Council on next steps", but rather that the small team would <u>inform or propose to</u> Council the appropriate next steps. <br><br>Re: item 5 on Closed Generics<br>4. Pg 6, 3rd para, line 5: the sentence, "<i>The NCSG also doesn’t believe that closed generics is a GAC specific issue and </i><i>disapproves of the advantage the GAC is benefitting from." </i>seems incomplete. Perhaps add the words "this dialogue" after the word"from"?</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><font color="#000000">Kind regards,</font><br><font color="#000000">Justine</font><br><b><br></b></div></div></div><br></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Wed, 20 Apr 2022 at 15:35, Nathalie Peregrine via council <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black">Attached, please find the draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting held on<span> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Thursday,
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