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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Thank you very much for the review, Justine!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">The updates have been made and will appear on the final document to be published on the 30<sup>th</sup> April 2022.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Nathalie
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Justine Chew <justine.chew.icann@gmail.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, 22 April 2022 at 03:28<br>
<b>To: </b>Nathalie Peregrine <nathalie.peregrine@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"council@gnso.icann.org" <council@gnso.icann.org>, "gnso-secs@icann.org" <gnso-secs@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: [council] Draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting 14 April 2022<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hello Nathalie,<br>
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Thank you for these draft minutes and please find following my comments on the same.<br>
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Re: item 4 on SSAD ODA<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Pg 3, 1st para, line 3: "The small team found a number of accuracies and errors of interpretation." - shouldn't "accuracies" be "inaccuracies"? <br>
2. Pg 3, last para, line 2: "SAD" should be "SSAD"<br>
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Re: item 5 on DNS Abuse<br>
3. Pg 5, the largest para: there are a bunch of misplaced or redundant commas which I will leave you to review/correct, but more importantly, the last sentence, I doubt that Paul McGrady "added that the aim will be to
<u>direct</u> the GNSO Council on next steps", but rather that the small team would
<u>inform or propose to</u> Council the appropriate next steps. <br>
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Re: item 5 on Closed Generics<br>
4. Pg 6, 3rd para, line 5: the sentence, "<i>The NCSG also doesn’t believe that closed generics is a GAC specific issue and disapproves of the advantage the GAC is benefitting from."
</i>seems incomplete. Perhaps add the words "this dialogue" after the word"from"?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="color:black">Justine</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, 20 Apr 2022 at 15:35, Nathalie Peregrine via council <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Dear Councilors,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Attached, please find the draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting held on </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thursday, 14
April 2022.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">If there are no comments, these minutes will be published on the website as approved, according to the </span><span lang="EN-US"><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_council_op-2Dprocedures-2D30jan18-2Den.pdf&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=VJZ4HFSDAqi8xbWCH1QdnlYHCscwUVxIRs2sVJWonVI&s=LtHAxrGECvjzBZS-IMiftG_6sd2rnsdL4iqkUOHsJvI&e=" target="_blank" title="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_council_op-2Dprocedures-2D30jan18-2Den.pdf&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=VJZ4HFSDAqi8xbWCH"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#954F72">GNSO
Rules of Procedure </span></a></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> section 3.5 "If no objections are received within 10 days, the minutes will be deemed to have been approved for posting" on </span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">30
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Thank you.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Kind Regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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