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<div class="">On Jun 29, 2022, at 9:12 PM, 陳曼茹 Manju Chen <<a href="mailto:manju@nii.org.tw" class="">manju@nii.org.tw</a>> wrote:</div>
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Sorry, I know it must be because of my inadequacy in English as a non-native speaker, but I'm having trouble understanding what this paragraph means:</div>
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We have monitored the considerable community discussions devoted to this prioritisation topic.<span class="" style="background-color:rgb(255,255,0)"> In each instance, community members were heard to ask specific operations questions to aid in their consideration</span>.
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Are we saying the community is being asked specific operation questions to aid in ICANN org or the Board's consideration? I think I understand the last 2 sentences where we say we don't think those questions are appropriate to be directed to us/ the community.
It's just the sentence marked in yellow I have trouble comprehending.</div>
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Would be grateful for any explanation and sorry again if this is after the deadline!</div>
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<div dir="ltr" class="x_gmail_attr">On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 10:16 PM DiBiase, Gregory via council <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" class="">council@gnso.icann.org</a>> wrote:<br class="">
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">A couple other small edits attached that I think capture our conversation in The Hague.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Thanks,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><b class="">From:</b> council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank" class="">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>>
<b class="">On Behalf Of </b>philippe.fouquart--- via council<br class="">
<b class="">Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 28, 2022 5:34 AM<br class="">
<b class="">To:</b> kurt <a href="http://kjpritz.com/" target="_blank" class="">kjpritz.com</a> <<a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" target="_blank" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>><br class="">
<b class="">Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">
gnso-secs@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank" class="">
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<b class="">Subject:</b> RE: [EXTERNAL][council] SSAD Light Impact Council - draft response<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Correction: we did say _<i class="">tomorrow</i>_ Wednesday 29<sup class="">th</sup> cob as deadline for this, not today.
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Thanks,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><b class="">From:</b> FOUQUART Philippe INNOV/NET <br class="">
<b class="">Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 28, 2022 2:27 PM<br class="">
<b class="">To:</b> 'kurt <a href="http://kjpritz.com/" target="_blank" class="">
kjpritz.com</a>' <<a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" target="_blank" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>><br class="">
<b class="">Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank" class="">
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<b class="">Subject:</b> RE: [council] SSAD Light Impact Council - draft response<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Thanks for sorting out the order of priorities in the letter, this is helpful. Some of the elements of the first iteration being more records of the discussion, we will see whether there’s benefit in bringing some of them back without
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Everyone, <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">please share any other comment you may have by the end of the day, for us to send this later this week.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Thanks.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<b class="">Sent:</b> Monday, June 27, 2022 10:52 PM<br class="">
<b class="">To:</b> FOUQUART Philippe INNOV/NET <<a href="mailto:philippe.fouquart@orange.com" target="_blank" class="">philippe.fouquart@orange.com</a>><br class="">
<b class="">Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank" class="">
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<b class="">Subject:</b> Re: [council] SSAD Light Impact Council - draft response<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Thanks for the opportunity to comment on this draft. Please consider the attached and feel free to use some, all or none of it. <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">I have added a brief bit of context at the start as this issue did not arise from the Board-Council interaction but rather came in separately from the staff.
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<li class="x_MsoNormal">to emphasize the importance of both (SSAD and SubPro) initiatives, and <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></li><li class="x_MsoNormal">that the Council does not view itself in a position, nor does it consider it the role of the Council, to dictate the allocation of ICANN org resources now that these policy recommendations are with the ICANN Board.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></li></ol>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">There was some re-arranging / re-wording that would render a redline somewhat ineffective but I can produce one. <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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