<div dir="ltr">Hi Devan,<br><br>A few comments for consideration.<br><br>1. Item 3, near to bottom half of page 2 - to insert "<font color="#0000ff">GNSO Review of GAC Communique</font>" sub-header immediately after "Vote results". Since sub-headers appear for the other 3 consent agenda items.<br><br>2. Item 4, on page 3 -<div><ul><li>To amend the the relevant intervention to "Justine Chew, <font color="#0000ff" style="">ALAC</font> Liaison <strike><font color="#0000ff">to the At Large Advisory Committee</font></strike>, asked how <font color="#0000ff" style="">might</font> self-assessment survey results <u><strike><font color="#0000ff">will be assessed and</font></strike></u> incorporated into Council's processes, <font color="#0000ff">if at all.</font></li></ul><ul><li>In Marika's reply immediately after, "received" is misspelt.<br></li></ul><ul><li>Also, I believe it is useful to note Sebastien's input after Marika's reply, so I propose this, "<font color="#0000ff">Sebastien Ducos, GNSO Chair, noted that while the surveys themselves point to a process, it is also Council's responsibility to read the survey results and to suggest improvements, whether it be in the process itself or in the particular charter of a working group.</font>"</li></ul><div>3. Item 5, on page 4 - I suspect that the 2nd AI is either premature or too prescriptive. From the transcript, both Paul and Jeff appear to suggest that more guidance on addressing the GAC's 23 Mar letter may result from the 4 May Council Extraordinary Meeting.<br><br>4. Item 6, AI on page 5 - it would be useful to add "... on the <font color="#0000ff" style="">Registration Data Request System (RDRS) (formerly the</font> Whois Disclosure System<u>)</u> implementation ...... the <font color="#0000ff" style=""><strike>WDS</strike> RDRS</font>."<br><br>5. Item 9.3, near the bottom of page 8 - Jeff's intervention to refine, "....raised that GNSO Council has already approved recommendations to have <font color="#0000ff"><strike>separate </strike>two </font>implementation review teams<u>,</u><font color="#0000ff"> one being the separate Applicant Support IRT.</font>" </div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><br><font color="#000000">Thanks, </font><br><font color="#000000">Justine</font><br></div></div></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, 28 Apr 2023 at 00:45, Devan Reed via council <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="msg7710599140394915106">
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<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black">Thank you.</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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