<div dir="auto">Hello, Greg, </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I’m sorry for not being able to deliver something under the desirable timeframe. Right after sending my previous email I heard the news of a family member passing and couldn’t get myself to finish that. </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">But in case you’d be willing to consider it still, I could have something based on the comments by tomorrow morning. </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Kind regards, </div><div dir="auto">Bruna </div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">DiBiase, Gregory <<a href="mailto:dibiase@amazon.com">dibiase@amazon.com</a>> schrieb am Mi. 22. Nov. 2023 um 18:56:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204)">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Bruna,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Noting that the draft still appears to be individual comments, and that the 27 November deadline for input (along with the US holiday beginning this Thursday) is quickly approaching, I’m concerned we don’t have time for everyone to conduct
a review of a draft and provide comments. We really appreciate the work done to date, but I would recommend bringing these concerns to your respective constituencies to ensure any comments can be timely submitted.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Greg<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Bruna Martins dos Santos <<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 20, 2023 3:20 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Caitlin Tubergen <<a href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org" target="_blank">caitlin.tubergen@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Mark W. Datysgeld <<a href="mailto:mark@governanceprimer.com" target="_blank">mark@governanceprimer.com</a>>; Osvaldo Novoa <<a href="mailto:osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com" target="_blank">osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com</a>>; DiBiase, Gregory <<a href="mailto:dibiase@amazon.com" target="_blank">dibiase@amazon.com</a>>; <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>; <a href="mailto:nacho@amadoz.cat" target="_blank">nacho@amadoz.cat</a><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hello, all, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I just came back from vacation - the first one I managed to take this year - and will work on something tomorrow to share with you. <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Bruna <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Bruna, Mark, and Osvaldo,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I’m checking back in, noting the impending deadline of Monday, 27 November – one week from today.<u></u><u></u></p>
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As a reminder, the full Council would need to sign off on this comment in order for it to be submitted by the Council.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please provide an update as soon as you are able.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Monday, November 13, 2023 at 9:53 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Mark W. Datysgeld" <<a href="mailto:mark@governanceprimer.com" target="_blank">mark@governanceprimer.com</a>>, Bruna Martins dos Santos <<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Osvaldo Novoa <<a href="mailto:osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com" target="_blank">osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Great team work.
<span style="font-family:"Segoe UI Emoji",sans-serif">😊</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">@Bruna – would it be possible to have something to share with the Council by Thursday for the Council meeting? This is an AOB item for the upcoming meeting.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you!<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Caitlin<u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Monday, November 13, 2023 at 8:47 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Bruna Martins dos Santos <<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Osvaldo Novoa <<a href="mailto:osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com" target="_blank">osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com</a>>, Caitlin Tubergen <<a href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org" target="_blank">caitlin.tubergen@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>"
<<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Bruna Martins dos Santos <<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 13, 2023 09:30<br>
<b>To:</b> Mark Datysgeld<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Osvaldo Novoa; Caitlin Tubergen; <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks for all the comments and for setting up a document. I have just added my thoughts as well since we dont have too many disagreements from whats being highlighted on the timing,
lack of action plan and methodology and so on. <br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">kind regards, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Thu, Nov 9, 2023 at 11:54 PM Mark Datysgeld <<a href="mailto:mark@governanceprimer.com" target="_blank">mark@governanceprimer.com</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p>I think your comments are very timely, Osvaldo. I agree with them.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I share your comments Mark and I have added some of my own regarding the delay of the third GNSO Review, due to start in June 2016, and also the lack of independent examination.
Perhaps my English is not vey good and my text needs some corrections but I think the ideas are clear.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif">I have made some initial considerations, under their own header for now, so that the other subteam members can evaluate them.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif">Best,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Here is a Google Doc to get you all started: <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1Rx_iHqL48AL2Wccv8MSinCE1I43TBH2JzW8SKLFy1ys/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!70lEuVKRGkRyBkpfvqbD5TAaQpHj_-KVPR0pYxG3LPmd8lowEANVyadLpiyCR5MwBu6DhsMOwdnFcs85HVJNpyfT9z61QxQ$" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rx_iHqL48AL2Wccv8MSinCE1I43TBH2JzW8SKLFy1ys/edit?usp=sharing
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<p class="MsoNormal">Of course, please let me know if I can be of further assistance.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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Caitlin<u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, November 8, 2023 at 5:21 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Caitlin Tubergen <a href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></span></a>, Bruna Martins dos Santos <a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)"><bruna.mrtns@gmail.com></span></a>,
Osvaldo Novoa <a href="mailto:osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)"><osvaldo.j.novoa@gmail.com></span></a><br>
<b>Cc: </b><a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)">"gnso-secs@icann.org"</span></a> <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)"><gnso-secs@icann.org></span></a><br>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, November 8, 2023 20:17<br>
<b>To:</b> Mark Datysgeld; Bruna Martins dos Santos; Osvaldo Novoa<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(5,99,193)">gnso-secs@icann.org</span></a><br>
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<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">The ICANN Board is currently seeking the community's input on the proposed </span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)"><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/pilot-holistic-review-draft-tor-18sep23-en.pdf" target="_blank" style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Pilot
Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference</span></a></span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">. This is an update to the first version posted for Public Comment in August 2022 and has been modified to reflect
community input. The primary focus of the Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference (ToR) is to address the four primary issues raised during the first Public Comment proceeding:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">The scope of Holistic Review is unclear</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">There is a lack of independent examination in the Holistic Review</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">There is a lack of identified dependencies</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">The community might not have the ability to support the Pilot Holistic Review work</span><u></u><u></u></li></ul>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white;word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">The ToR Development Team also shortened and revised the ToR document to include more direct language and clearer deliverables.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white;word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">Considering the potential implications on the ICANN structures and work, the Board is seeking input on whether the </span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)"><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/gnso.icann.org/sites/default/files/policy/2023/correspondence/gurnick-to-soac-leadership-cip-ccg-et-al-13oct23-en.pdf__;!!PtGJab4!93mcVB5brAjpOgOwUK0ZV8Zp6ODqsjMHYUngeh5vTVic_cWDww_BcqQfRGCgYJazq254JgomrE8nXecjXpDkinNHU-HdJy0$" target="_blank" style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">revised
Draft ToR</span><span style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(5,99,193)">[gnso.icann.org]</span></a> </span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">seems fit for purpose, and whether it sufficiently addresses the issues identified in the first Public
Comment proceeding.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white;word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">The following questions are designed to aid responders in formulating their views:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Do you support the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Terms of Reference as drafted?</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">Does the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Terms of Reference sufficiently address the four primary issues identified in the first Public Comment proceeding? [The four primary issues include:</span><u></u><u></u></li></ol>
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<span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif">2.</span><span style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
</span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif"> </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">The scope of Holistic Review is unclear</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">There is a lack of independent examination in the Holistic Review</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">There is a lack of identified dependencies</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">The community might not have the ability to support the Pilot Holistic Review work</span><u></u><u></u></li></ul>
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<span style="color:black">Does the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Terms of Reference sufficiently clarify the deliverables for the Pilot Holistic Review?</span><u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="background:repeat white">
<span style="color:black">Do you support the next steps for the Pilot Holistic Review (as noted below)?</span><u></u><u></u></li></ol>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white;word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">For more background information, interested parties are invited to listen to the <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/atrt/Pilot+Holistic+Review+-+Revised+Draft+Terms+of+Reference+Webinar+-+21+August+2023" target="_blank" style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:rgb(5,99,193)">webinar</span></a> on
this topic. </span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in;background:repeat white;word-spacing:0px"><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">Deadline for feedback is </span><strong><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">27
November 2023</span></strong><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;color:black">.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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