[CPWG] Fwd: ALAC Statement on Unified Access Model: Comparison of 3 October Draft to Initial Draft

[Greg Shatan]

All,

I'm attaching a comparison of the current draft to the prior draft of the
Unified Access Model statement.  I've tried to take the various comments
into account and where there were conflicts, to either synthesize them or
find a middle ground, in most cases.  There were some comments that did not
seem to fit, or which seemed to be positions that would not be broadly
supported.  For example, this did not seem to be the place for a broad
rejection or critique of multistakeholderism as it currently  exists in
ICANN.  (I will note that virtually every stakeholder group or structure
seems to believe that they are disadvantaged and that some other group is
unfairly advantaged -- only the names change.)

I cut some of the introductory language and some of the discussion of
Appendix E to make this shorter and focus more on ALAC's statements.  I
also labeled subsections so it would be clear what the fonts were intended
to convey.  While it is still long-ish, I think it is more clear and
readable now.  Thanks to all for their comments.

I look forward to views on this draft, which we can hopefully finalize very
soon.

Best regards,

Greg

greg at isoc-ny.org
President, ISOC-NY
"The Internet is for everyone"


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From: Gregory S. Shatan <gshatan at mosessinger.com>
Date: Mon, Oct 8, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Subject: ALAC Statement on Unified Access Model: Comparison of 3 October
Draft to Initial Draft
To: greg at isoc-ny.org <greg at isoc-ny.org>








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