[CPWG] RDDS EPDP Phase 2a Initial report comment

[Alan Greenberg]

The actual aubmission was just the answers (in red) via a Google form. Evin is working on the formatted version and can fix that.

Alan

On July 20, 2021 6:53:03 AM EDT, "Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond" <ocl at gih.com> wrote:
>Thanks Alan.
>A Minor point in the Staff intro: the CPWG is mentioned several times, 
>without a mention that it is the acronym for the At-Large Consolidated 
>Policy Working Group. Not a big deal at all.
>Kindest regards,
>
>Olivier
>
>On 20/07/2021 01:45, Alan Greenberg via CPWG wrote:
>> The comment was submitted. The contents can be found at 
>>
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_EPaFDv46r8HEq3Rj7fY0IZmkYy63zMiIIGPalF5jPY/edit#.
>>
>> The only changes from the earlier versions are:
>>
>> 1. In the first answer, the objection to there being a Recommendation
>
>> is moved to the top.
>>
>> 2. In the last answer, a paragraph was added about the concept of 
>> following rules instead of aiming at good policy.
>>
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>Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond, PhD
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