[CPWG] Final DRAFT: NIS2 Comment

Alan Greenberg alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
Mon Mar 15 04:34:13 UTC 2021


Attached please find:

- Redline of full comment showing changes from previous version
- Clean new version

- Abbreviated comment (<=4000 characters) for posting to the EU (full 
version will be an attachment)

The comment is also posted to the Wiki 
(https://community.icann.org/x/zINeCQ) and is available as a Google 
Doc at 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ch_1i2BpbVYxB16sK8KogOk1s3RIL97170tanKuuF98.

Please make any comments to the Google Doc or directly to me via e-mail.

PLEASE RESTRICT COMMENTS TO TYPOS and IMPORTANT CHANGES.

The comments need ALAC approval prior to Thursday, the deadline for submission.

Alan
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