[CPWG] [GNSO-TPR] Input Due 16 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22

[gopal]

Dear Dr. Steinar Grøtterød,

Many thanks for the nice report. It was not ojnly 5 minutes of the budgeted time but the entire 90 minutes of the CPWG meeting on 21 December 2022 happened in jiffy to my mind.

I am sorry for the belated comment.

The report prepared by  your Working group is very nice to read through.

I seek one clarification:

Eventually, the Working Group will not be funtional / operational. In that case what will be the "Sufficient Paper Trial" by the gaining registrar for the audit purpose? Who will determine "sufficient" and execute?

Sincerely,



Gopal T V
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From: CPWG <cpwg-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Steinar Grøtterød via CPWG <cpwg at icann.org>
Sent: 21 December 2022 16:50
To: CPWG <cpwg at icann.org>
Subject: [CPWG] FW: [GNSO-TPR] Input Due 16 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22


Dear CPWG members,



Attached to this email is the updated recommendations based on the input from the Public Comment Period for the TPR PDP Initial Report Phase 1a.



I will distribute to the CPWG mailing list a space where we can make our comments in addition to the At-Large WG members recommendations.



We should allocate some time for the discussions at the CPWG meetings in January 2023, making it possible to give our feedback within the set deadline (Jan 16, 2023)



Regards,



Steinar Grøtterød



From: GNSO-TPR <gnso-tpr-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Emily Barabas <emily.barabas at icann.org>
Date: Wednesday, 21 December 2022 at 11:58
To: gnso-tpr at icann.org <gnso-tpr at icann.org>
Subject: [GNSO-TPR] Input Due 16 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22

Dear working group members,



As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide an updated redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 10-22 (see pages 26-39), as well as revisions resulting from the last round of input on the previous redline and strawman (see highlighted text on pages 17-19, 21, and 24). The document is attached.



The deadline for submitting input is 16 January 2023. After the deadline, the working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable.



Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.



Kind regards,



 Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily





Emily Barabas

Policy Development Support Senior Manager

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976

www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org/>




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