[CPWG] GNSO-TPR PDP Phase 1a: Latest redline version

[Steinar Grøtterød]

Dear CPWG members,

The updated redline is attached and includes:


  *   New edits supported by the working group after reviewing public comments and considering small group outputs.
  *   Updated responses to charter questions and rationales to more fully provide context and reasoning for the WG’s recommendations.
  *   Updates for consistency in terminology, the way that timeframes are referenced, etc.
  *   Discussion of items that the NCSG and SSAC asked the working group to consider, but that the working group determined were out of scope.

Please make sure to review the following, with a particular focus on edits that are new since the 21 December redline. New edits are highlighted in yellow.

  *   Section 3 of the report (pages 11-50)
  *   Annex D (pages 58-63)
Highlights in blue are to assist staff in tracking areas of the report that will need to updated in the future. Working group members can ignore these highlights for now.

@Chantelle Doerksen<mailto:chantelle.doerksen at icann.org>: Please add this to the “Additional Resources” section at the agenda page.

Regards,
Steinar Grøtterød
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