[CWG-Stewardship] CWG RFP2B Proposal

[Robert Guerra]

My note below has already led to private comments. I appreciate folks
being frank..

Suffice it to say the following, my choice of words may not have been
ideal and perhaps my some seen as insensitive.  That wasn't my intent.
Apologies for that if it is the case.

If you permit me, let me try to rephrase the comment, in perhaps a more
constructive fashion..

(1) How many type of agreements exist? Only 2, or more?

Section 2.2 lists two country examples. Are they reflective of the fact
that there are only 2 types of agreements with ccTLD's?

If there are more, then it might be worthwhile to include an additional
example that perhaps could include additional geographical regions.

(2) Good to add references ..

If the reference does not already exist in the document, it might be
good to point to the list of existing agreements with ccTLD's.

regards

Robert



On 2014-11-11 9:44 AM, Robert Guerra wrote:
> Chuck,
> 
> Thanks for sharing the updated draft.
> 
> A quick comment ...
> 
> - in section 2.2 Additional sources of accountability for a limited
> number of ccTLDs sample agreements for .au and .az are cited.
> 
> 
> 
> We might want to give more thought as to the countries that are listed
> so that they represent different legal systems and different regions of
> the world. Additionally,  IMHO, it might also be good to make sure that
> countries are listed with good rule of law..
> 
> Perhaps it might be good to keep Australia, and add another country  Say
> one from Latin America ?
> 
> 
> regards
> 
> Robert
> 
> 
> 
> On 2014-11-11 8:18 AM, Gomes, Chuck wrote:
>> Here is a draft of the ICG RFP Section 2B proposal for full CWG review
>> and discussion.  Please make any suggested edits using the Word
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