[CWG-Stewardship] FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal

[Greg Shatan]

Chuck and All,

I have attached a revised version RFP2B.  Primarily, I took certain
sections of the text (primarily those involving lists) and converted those
sections to tables.  Due to quirks in the interaction between tables and
track changes, I did not make these changes in track changes.  However, I
think it will be fairly obvious where these changes are, especially since
there were no tables in this document beforehand.

One reason for this change is that, in preparing RFP3, we will need to
consider how these existing aspects oversight and accountability will be
dealt with in our transition proposal.  It will be easier to take these
charts and add additional columns to show this.

I did make a few minor editing changes as well.  These are marked in track
changes.

Greg Shatan



On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:

>  Edits need to be received not later than 1800 UTC, Monday, 17 November.
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> cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Gomes, Chuck
> *Sent:* Tuesday, November 11, 2014 8:19 AM
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> *Subject:* [CWG-Stewardship] CWG RFP2B Proposal
> *Importance:* High
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> Here is a draft of the ICG RFP Section 2B proposal for full CWG review and
> discussion.  Please make any suggested edits using the Word redlining
> function and save the file with your name before sending it to the CWG
> list.  Questions and comments  are also welcome on this list before you
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