[CWG-Stewardship] FW: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments

Gomes, Chuck cgomes at verisign.com
Thu Jun 4 14:20:12 UTC 2015

Regarding the CCWG dependencies document, I made one very minor edit and two substantial edits that are highlighted in the attached file that I think are very important.


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Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments


FYI. Please see attached from Sidley on review by them of the draft final proposal and in response to the CWG’s instructions managed by the CWG Client Committee.


From: Flanagan, Sharon [mailto:sflanagan at sidley.com]
Sent: 04 June 2015 06:16
To: Client Committee; (cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>)
Subject: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments

Dear All,

Attached are Sidley’s comments on the revised CWG proposal.  Our comments are reflected in tracked changes to the marked version circulated on June 3 (word document titled Final Transition Proposal).  We have also attached a redline showing only our incremental changed pages (pdf document titled Sidley Comments…).

In addition, attached is a draft of language expressing the conditionality of the CWG proposal on the requisite CCWG accountability mechanisms.  This is marked against current paragraph 105 in the CWG proposal.
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