[CWG-Stewardship] Comments to Final Draft

Greg Shatan gregshatanipc at gmail.com
Thu Jun 11 00:02:25 UTC 2015


I've made a few changes to the Term Sheet section, including shortening the
section on trademarks and putting it in brackets to further signify that
it's an open point.  Also made some formatting changes (including having
the headers on every page).

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