[CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft

[Martin Boyle]

Hi all,

And special thanks to Elise and Paul for their cooperation on g.ii (now 7.ii), Stephanie for some useful proposed wording for j (now 10), Maarten Simon for some comments and suggested edits and Erick for some interesting discussion on h.ii (now 8.ii).

The result is perhaps a slightly more complicated document that it was on Tuesday evening!

I propose that we look to:


*         Remove all the comments and accept all the editing that has not had any comment that is the side heading and paragraphs (using the new numbering) 2, 3, 5.i, 5.iv, 6.ii, 7 chapeau, 7.iii-vi, 8.i, 8.iii and 9.

*         See whether the suggested compromise on 7.ii is acceptable.

*         See whether the proposed text in 5.iii is acceptable.

*         In the light of Maarten's comment on 5.vi, check whether maintaining the current text (including removing the square brackets) is acceptable.

*         See whether 6.iii should be retained and whether there is consensus to remove the square brackets.

*         See if the edits proposed for 7.i are acceptable.

*         See if Stephanie's proposal for 10 is acceptable.

If we have time I'd like to at least ask Erick to introduce the alternative he has proposed for 8.ii.  However, it is not proving to be an easy discussion so I propose to take this discussion off line as there is unlikely to be any resolution in time for or during tomorrow's call.

Thanks and I look forward to a constructive discussion tomorrow.


Martin



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