[CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version 2.2.1 of the draft transition plan

[Marika Konings]

Dear All,

Please find attached version 2.2.1 of the draft transition plan. This version includes the following minor revisions:

  *   Edits to address the points raised by Andrew
  *   Edits to address the comments from Brenden
  *   Edits to clarify some areas, fix typos and fix a couple of places where we still had references to NTIA and/or contractor in the proposed language.

To facilitate your review, the previous redlines have been accepted and only those changes that were made to this version are in redline. Of course, that should not prevent you from making any comments, edits or questions on any other parts of the document.

Best regards,

Marika

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