[CWG-Stewardship] Fwd: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
Seun Ojedeji
seun.ojedeji at gmail.com
Sun Aug 7 15:42:19 UTC 2016
Hello Kavous,
An option could be that you look at the PDF and make your comment on the
word version(though you can make comment on the pdf as well)
Another option is if you (or someone) has the previous clean version then
one can produce a redline off the two clean versions.
Regards
Sent from my LG G4
Kindly excuse brevity and typos
On 7 Aug 2016 4:37 p.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
wrote:
> Dear Andrew,
> Tks again for your kind reply.
> Please send me a red mark Word Version and I Will reply today.
> I HAVE SOME CONCERS ON SOME OF THE CHANGED MADE BY GREC
> Regards
> Kavouss
>
>
> 2016-08-07 17:28 GMT+02:00 Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>:
>
>> I don't know whetheer you will get that before tomorrow, and that is
>> really rather late. Can you at least say what your concerns are?
>> There really isn't a lot of time: this needs to go to public comment
>> on Thursday. An additional day to wait for the comments would be bad.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> A
>>
>> On Sun, Aug 07, 2016 at 05:14:50PM +0200, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:
>> > Seun,
>> > I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean
>> > Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was
>> > the changes introduced by Greg
>> > I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.
>> > Regards
>> > Kavouss
>> >
>> > 2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>:
>> >
>> > > A word version was included in Greg's mail
>> > >
>> > > Regards
>> > >
>> > > Sent from my LG G4
>> > > Kindly excuse brevity and typos
>> > >
>> > > On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <
>> kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
>> > > wrote:
>> > >
>> > >> Grec,
>> > >> Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of
>> them
>> > >> In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls
>> provide
>> > >> a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient
>> > >> Regards
>> > >> Kavouss
>> > >>
>> > >>
>> > >> 2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>:
>> > >>
>> > >>> CWG,
>> > >>>
>> > >>> I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
>> > >>> relating to the IANA IPR. In addition to any other comments you
>> may have,
>> > >>> I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below:
>> (1)
>> > >>> identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2)
>> providing a
>> > >>> brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (
>> > >>> *see* Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).
>> > >>>
>> > >>> This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR
>> collaborative
>> > >>> group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public
>> comment
>> > >>> period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Greg
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>> > >>> From: Hofheimer, Joshua T. <jhofheimer at sidley.com>
>> > >>> Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM
>> > >>> Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft:
>> 08-05-2016
>> > >>> To: Client <cwg-client at icann.org>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Dear Client Committee,
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community
>> Agreement
>> > >>> for your review and comment. This is an iterative version prepared
>> jointly
>> > >>> by counsel (Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to
>> reflect the
>> > >>> 7-point discussion items. To be clear, it is still a work in
>> progress, but
>> > >>> we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Two important issues to highlight:
>> > >>>
>> > >>> 1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory
>> > >>> party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community
>> > >>> Agreement. For your information, the attached draft has the
>> organizations
>> > >>> put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and
>> > >>>
>> > >>> 2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided
>> on
>> > >>> behalf of the Names Community. The following high-level
>> description was
>> > >>> included in a draft of the Naming Functions Agreement. If this is
>> > >>> acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the
>> Client
>> > >>> Committee to provide a sufficient description):
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> The “*IANA Naming Function*” is comprised of:
>> > >>>
>> > >>> (a) Management of the DNS Root Zone (“*Root Zone
>> Management*
>> > >>> ”);
>> > >>>
>> > >>> (b) Management of the .INT top-level domain;
>> > >>>
>> > >>> (c) Maintenance of a repository of internationalized
>> > >>> domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and
>> > >>>
>> > >>> (d) Provision of other services related to the
>> management
>> > >>> of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at
>> ICANN’s
>> > >>> expense.
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we
>> are
>> > >>> trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various
>> stakeholders and
>> > >>> release for public comment by Thursday.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Thank you in advance.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Cheers,
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Josh
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> *Joshua Hofheimer*
>> > >>>
>> > >>> *Sidley Austin LLP*
>> > >>>
>> > >>> *jhofheimer at sidley.com <jhofheimer at sidley.com>*
>> > >>>
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>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> *From:* iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net [mailto:iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net]
>> *On
>> > >>> Behalf Of *Jorge Contreras
>> > >>> *Sent:* Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM
>> > >>> *To:* iana-ipr at nro.net
>> > >>> *Subject:* [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I
>> > >>> have collaborated on over the past two days. We believe that it
>> reflects
>> > >>> the current requirements of the parties, and submit it for your
>> review and
>> > >>> discussion.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of
>> > >>> 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Please note a few items that still need to be completed, including
>> the
>> > >>> description of the IANA Names Service, the identities of the CCG
>> > >>> representatives, etc.
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Best regards,
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Jorge
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Jorge L. Contreras
>> > >>>
>> > >>> Contreras Legal Strategy LLC
>> > >>>
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>> > >>>
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>> > >>>
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>> ajs at anvilwalrusden.com
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