[Gnso-epdp-idn-team] Draft Output: A3, D8, E5, E3

[Ariel Liang]

Dear All,

Please find the redlined draft text that was revised as a result of the discussion of last week’s meeting to close loops on recommendations that may have potential gaps. For the ease of your review, the revised redlined text are highlighted in yellow in the following documents:


  *   A3, Rec 1.7, pp.3-5: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit
  *   D8, Rationale for Rec 2.16-2.18, p.15: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit
  *   E5, Rationale for Rec 3.2-3.3, p.5: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit
  *   E3, added variant labels to Reserved Names, pp.2, 5 & 6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/115eSNnxBsCbUszEGU7i4xbzLwu1u8_UdaGEJD9CVvVc/edit

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As a reminder, the previous batches of draft text circulated previously include the following:

Batch 1:
E3 (String Similarity Review) https://docs.google.com/document/d/115eSNnxBsCbUszEGU7i4xbzLwu1u8_UdaGEJD9CVvVc/edit?usp=sharing

Batch 2:
E3a, E4, E2, B4a, E1, B5, E7, and A8: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iXaAy3uDyoVlZ4L9jYiY_8bzqpZR7I1xa9qUWenB5XU/edit

Batch 3:
Draft text revised as a result of the review of ICANN org’s substantive input

Topic A: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit

·         A5, Rec 1.5 and IG 1.6, pp.6-8

·         A9, IG 1.15, pp.15-16

Topic B: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit

·         B2, Rec 2.2, p.2

·         B5, Rec 2.8, pp.5-6

Topic D: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit?pli=1

·         D1a, Rec 2.4, IG 2.15, Rec 2.22, IG 2.23, pp.1-3

·         D1b, Rec 2.6, IG 2.19, IG 2.20, IG 2.21, pp.4-6

·         Note: Discussion of IG 2.xx is tabled, pending ALAC team’s input

·         D8, Rec 2.16, Rec 2.17, Rec 2.18, pp.13-14

You may notice some additional redlines on these draft documents that were not specifically called out. Those redlines intend to incorporate the editorial / non-substantive input from ICANN org, which the EPDP Team already discussed and agreed to let staff proceed with revisions. You are not required to review those redlines right now and they can be reviewed when the draft Initial Report is circulated.

Please be so kind to complete your review of all these batches of draft text before ICANN76. The second reading and discussion of your input (if any) is expected to take place during ICANN76 EPDP-IDNs working sessions on Saturday, 11 March.

Thank you for your review!

Best Regards,
Ariel, Steve, Emily


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