<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div>Dear all</div><div><br></div><div>The ALAC team respectfully puts forward the following points in response to the inputs from RySG made earlier:<br><ol><li>At the outset, we recognize the fact that IDN Variants have been proposed in response to the needs of language communities and end-users, where the use of variant labels is usual and expected.</li><li>As we are in the process of introducing variant labels and label sets for the first time, we note that there is a high likelihood of differences between the current operational practices and the practices after we introduce variant labels and sets.</li><li>It is important to ensure that the end-user aspects of socializing such differences are considered by the EPDP on IDNs.</li><li>We would consider the consistency of user experience as an integral part of the “operational aspects” when we introduce variant labels and sets on the root zone. Part of the difficulty is that “operational aspects” are not defined, and are perhaps implicitly assumed to be based on the current practices at the levels of RO-Registrar-Reseller. When considering variant labels and sets, we propose that the impact on end-users (both registrants and users of domain names) be also explicitly considered under the rubric of “operational aspects”, in which case the consistency of end-user experience <i>vis-à-vis</i> variants becomes important to consider.</li><li>We are flexible regarding the use of the phrase “usability goals”, but we would recommend ensuring that the consistency of end-user experience is captured in the Rationale for Recommendation 2.6.</li></ol><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>With kind regards</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>satish</div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Aug 23, 2022 at 6:46 AM Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="gmail-msg-5884190191807715093">





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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Dennis, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you for providing the detailed input from RySG for Recommendation 2.6 and its rationale.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Ariel <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;color:black">"Tan Tanaka, Dennis" <<a href="mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com" target="_blank">dtantanaka@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, August 19, 2022 at 4:36 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org" target="_blank">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: Confirm Edits: Group 2 Charter Questions Related to "Same Entity" Principle at Top-Level<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Members of the RySG reviewed the proposed revision to the Rationale for Recommendation 2.6 which incorporates a reference to “usability goals for </span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> variants”.
 We consider this addition to be inappropriate for two reasons. First, the language in the rationale should not be used to expand the intent (or scope) of the recommendation itself. In this case, Recommendation 2.6 refers to the technical and operational competence
 of a TLD registry operator, therefore the corresponding rationale should elaborate on the same terms. Second, the term “usability goals” is not defined which, if taken into consideration, can lead to subjective outcomes from an evaluation standpoint, which
 can impact predictability of the evaluation process.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Therefore, the RySG respectfully rejects the latest revision to the language in the section Rationale for Recommendation 2.6. At the same time, we provide the following
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in"><u><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">Recommendation 2.6:</span></u><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> The applicant will be required, as part of the application process, to explain the reason(s)
 why it needs to activate the applied-for variant label(s). In addition, the applicant will be required to demonstrate their ability to manage the primary </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> gTLD
 and the applied-for variant label(s) as a set from both a technical and operational perspective.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in"><u><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">Rationale for Recommendation 2.6</span></u><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">: As </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> gTLDs
 and variant labels that are considered a set are yet to be delegated and operated at the root zone level, there is uncertainty about how </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">a</span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:red">the</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> set </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">of
 variant TLDs </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">will be managed and operated by
</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">a</span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:red">the</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> registry operator </span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:red">from a technical and user
 perspective</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">. Therefore, it will be important that applicants are able to explain their need for a set of </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> variant </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">TLD </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">label(s)
 as well as </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">to </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">demonstrate their technical capability to operate and manage the set of </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">TLDs</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">. </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">Consequently</span><span style="font-family:Times;color:black"> </span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:red">Therefore</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">,
 the applicant will be required to respond to additional application questions to address why they seek to activate those variant label(s) in addition to the primary new gTLD (i.e., necessity and expected usage of the variant labels), </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)">as
 well as how it plans to manage the set technically and operationally <s>to achieve the security, stability, and usability goals for </s></span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span></s><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)"> variants</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(68,114,196)"> </span><s><span style="font-family:Times;color:red">as
 well as how it plans to manage the set operationally, with a view to ensuring a secure, stable, and consistent user experience</span></s><span style="font-family:Times;color:black">. </span><span style="font-family:Times;color:rgb(112,173,71)">The applicant’s response
 to these questions is expected to be a critical component in the evaluation process. Evaluators with requisite expertise are expected to assess these responses. </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">In addition, we ask the </span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> EPDP
 working group to consider removing, or clarifying, the last two sentences (in green). They seem editorial in nature, and we are unsure as to what specifically these will accomplish. With respect to <i>“The applicant’s response to these questions is expected
 to be a critical component in the evaluation process</i>” Is the objective to promote </span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:rgb(7,7,6);background:rgb(255,238,148) none repeat scroll 0% 0%">IDN</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> variant
 management competence questions over other aspects of the application? If the answer is no, then we don’t understand the need to make such an observation i.e.,
<i>“critical component”.</i> With respect to <i>“Evaluators with requisite expertise are expected to assess these responses”, </i>the RySG believes is a redundant and unnecessary statement as we expect that every step of the application process is undertaken
 in a professional and competent manner. However, if the intent is to provide instructions to the implementation team i.e., to seek ad hoc expertise, then we suggest making that clarification.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">We are happy to continue this conversation over the course of the next working group meeting.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Dennis, on behalf the RySG IDN EPDP members</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Friday, August 12, 2022 at 2:39 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Dennis Tan Tanaka <<a href="mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com" target="_blank">dtantanaka@verisign.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Confirm Edits: Group 2 Charter Questions Related to "Same Entity" Principle at Top-Level</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">During its meeting on <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/secure-web.cisco.com/1D9WAeo4A7tGzNRh7jMth-JcnjcXnvGtqYuUYgY8DQKQmJ1HbUZ_F78x5s15YF_HgVAPZVUrqGppq-hZQwU27_iTXQ6OxJv1W0U1OWB-_tEADI82dp0QnAgt_52TcfNUAGyQG-m5dQscTHTHJGmaY0Qz8ksvX4R4KooZJUY0ntNP1Z3frhRYqagYRm1k2demR_rGZlJYGlpxBGBvJhil7pTsf67Rn1eE9zaBS9Cwox92ljHliXcpWMEZRxSyGuT9K/https*3A*2F*2Fcommunity.icann.org*2Fx*2FJgYVD__;JSUlJSU!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZMyAHEaYk$" target="_blank">
28 July [secure-web.cisco.com]</a>, the EPDP Team discussed the input (mainly from RySG) for the outcome language of Group 2 charter questions. Members had preliminary agreement on the suggested edits discussed during the call.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">Since some members were not be able to make it to the 28 July call, staff are circulating the suggested edits for your review / confirmation. If no objection to the edits by
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span>Charter Question B2, Recommendation 2.3 and Rationale (p.2):
<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZM0VLcHwb$" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com]</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span>Charter Question D1b (Part 2), Rationale for Recommendation 2.5 and 2.6 (p.3):
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com]</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;color:black">"Tan Tanaka, Dennis" <<a href="mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com" target="_blank">dtantanaka@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, July 15, 2022 at 4:30 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org" target="_blank">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: [Gnso-epdp-idn-team] Reminder: Draft Outcome: Group 2 Charter Questions Related to "Same Entity" Principle at Top-Level</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">On behalf the RySG members of the EPDP I would like to submit the following observations to the draft outcomes.<u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Summary of the redline</span></u><span style="color:black">: Adding clarifying language to reflect that allocation alone of a TLD to a same entity cannot guarantee avoiding denial
 of service failure mode.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Proposed language: Rationale for Recommendation 2.1</span></u><span style="color:black">: To support its consideration of charter question B1, the EPDP Team reviewed the SubPro
 PDP recommendation 25.5 and Staff Paper recommendation 2, as well as their rationale. The EPDP Team agreed that abiding by the “same entity” principle and having the same registry operator for all allocatable variant labels of an existing gTLD will help minimize</span><span style="color:red">,
 but not guarantee,<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="color:black">the security risk associated with the “failure modes” – including denial of service and misconnection – when dealing with variant labels. Therefore, the EPDP Team
 affirms to extend the SubPro PDP and the Staff Paper recommendations to existing gTLDs.<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Why the redline?</span></u><span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"><span style="color:black"> </span></span><span style="color:black">Recommendation 2.1 is applied at the top level,
 not at the domain name level. Making a TLD label allocatable to a single entity (or withheld) does not directly avoid the failure mode of denial of service. Even if the gTLD variant is activated into the root, an actual domain name (second level.variantTLD)
 needs to be registered and operated, in all variant TLDs. So, while it can help to minimize denial of service problem, it cannot guarantee it due to downstream actions (by other entities different than  the registry operator) that need to be implemented. Therefore,
 the inclusion of a caveat. Related to this. For special purpose TLDs (brand, geo, community based) if the variant set is held to the same requirements, then it is possible that allocatable variants do not meet the same eligibility requirements as the primary
 label (for example, a trademark record). Avoiding denial of service due to an inactive TLD variant (in this case) is not only improbable, but impossible.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Summary of the redline</span></u><span style="color:black">: a registry operator should not be expected to ensure consistent user experience because it does not host or manage
 content (e.g. website, email services).</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Rationale for Recommendation 2.6</span></u><span style="color:black">: As IDN gTLDs and variant labels that are considered a set are yet to be delegated and operated at the root
 zone level, there is uncertainty about how the set will be managed and operated by the registry operator from a technical and user perspective. Therefore, it will be important that applicants are able to explain their need for a set of IDN variant label(s)
 as well as demonstrate their technical capability to operate and manage the set. Therefore, the applicant will be required to respond to additional application questions to address why they seek to activate those variant label(s) in addition to the primary
 new gTLD (i.e., necessity and expected usage of the variant labels),<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><s><span style="color:red">as well as how it plans to manage the set operationally, with a view to ensuring a secure, stable, and consistent
 user experience</span></s><span style="color:black">. The applicant’s response to these questions is expected to be a critical component in the evaluation process. Evaluators with requisite expertise are expected to assess these responses.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Why the redline</span></u><span style="color:black">? While the language is in the rationale and not the draft recommendation, it may be misconstrued in an implementation guideline.
 We are far away from discussing operational requirements, but the suggestion that a registry operator should be expected to “manage” and “ensure” a “consistent user experience”, we think it may be misleading. We suggest removing that sentence from the rationale
 which does not affect the overall intent.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Summary of the redline</span></u><span style="color:black">: Minor change for consistency in terminology.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Recommendation 2.3</span></u><span style="color:black">: If the registry operator operating a variant gTLD label changes its back-end registry service provider, all the variant
 gTLD label(s) in the set must also<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><s><span style="color:red">switch</span></s><span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"><span style="color:red"> </span></span><span style="color:red">transition<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="color:black">to
 the same new back-end registry service provider.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><u><span style="color:black">Why the redline?</span></u><span style="color:black"> Harmonizing language with<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/secure-web.cisco.com/1Bro8B5l_Wcw-ezqU1OiQcoObazPmJzwJpUWFjkiiXES00JXqtKgI2gVz_hD2sXstZm5_ldcDUgHHJswFa4JQxfOuyTD-tSJEf1mpWyvxHalSD72s_pziLy4RZD7Wg88_f75QkdAD03V8ed99QB1107S1_mMhQ_0M56lWRu5kxWY-xuXzCpiJ_54AdTbxgTZioJy1VY2tTqedXvux8cLXGwLD65rJDWvGiQenDHZHF9712hdTfQjq8aQTGC4tNRx2/https*3A*2F*2Furldefense.com*2Fv3*2F__https*3A*2Fsecure-web.cisco.com*2F17PTWZSoYgDuVsWnubBEirA3cdXcqCb3xaJvHUco0vIFE1JznqamjdBb352P4KjBxpAuek6hCj41p3O8PuxP9PM79-0BPFb5L7RGgGbfTTiXelonTZdunNe_W5PB0ASOjWhihZyP_riulkqkwG0aSheBh8C8EL5ZSdHLHoL9M-PsZBj9LUbBvCzKQOsdRqirobmmtSBBiaNZBcSJLwJhuMtIIonNwaAL1cJi1dslnQIbkg1YPz3Exx0LsSGSN5CUQ*2Fhttps*2A3A*2A2F*2A2Fwww.icann.org*2A2Fresources*2A2Fmaterial-subcontracting-arrangement__*3BJSUlJSU*21*21PtGJab4*218c3Wua0ZIsCJQHOFJY_Hi171n9LVSKFXACciHXiBvFTWzNf8ZwMMPgLO40g-0oKSqBsyaCSdL8dpYhShiwllm2lE0Osb*24__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJQ!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZM-6XYiBo$" title="https://secure-web.cisco.com/17PTWZSoYgDuVsWnubBEirA3cdXcqCb3xaJvHUco0vIFE1JznqamjdBb352P4KjBxpAuek6hCj41p3O8PuxP9PM79-0BPFb5L7RGgGbfTTiXelonTZdunNe_W5PB0ASOjWhihZyP_riulkqkwG0aSheBh8C8EL5ZSdHLHoL9M-PsZBj9LUbBvCzKQOsdRqirobmmtSBBiaNZBcSJLwJhuMtIIonNwaAL1c" target="_blank">MSA
 change process [secure-web.cisco.com] [secure-web.cisco.com]</a>, which uses the term “transition”.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in"><span style="color:black">One additional note. On draft recommendation 2.8 (B5: special purpose TLDs) I have shared the draft outcome with our colleagues in the Brand Registry Group and GeoTLD Group. I’m working
 with them to get their insights, so I’d like to ask for your patience while I compile their input.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in"><span style="color:black">Dennis, on behalf the RySG IDN EPDP members</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;color:black">Gnso-epdp-idn-team <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org" target="_blank">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, July 14, 2022 at 12:04 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] [Gnso-epdp-idn-team] Reminder: Draft Outcome: Group 2 Charter Questions Related to "Same Entity" Principle at Top-Level</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in">This is the final reminder for reviewing the draft outcome language for Group 2 charter questions by
<b><u>EOB Friday, 15 July</u></b> (initial deadline extended by one week). Please see details below.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in">FYI - the ALAC Team informed staff that they agree with the draft language for those questions.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;color:black">Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org" target="_blank">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, June 24, 2022 at 11:43 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Draft Outcome: Group 2 Charter Questions Related to "Same Entity" Principle at Top-Level</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in">Dear All <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in"><span style="color:black">Please find the draft<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>outcome<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>language for
</span>Group 2 <span style="color:black">charter questions </span>related to “same entity” principle at the top-level, which are:
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span>B1, B2, B3, B5: <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/secure-web.cisco.com/125QVY2mWi6jyMF5qSWVo_aIiWbivCcQNGcDg4vsmBBg2a2Q4t3nk_roJIxw6Mgkq_S0Hk96rftyP4vM6UKMz-OpaULPw4A0rFL2Hm4Z0lvuKNAhNBWbxJGNWe_3CWaOAh2wOAsnUbFr06Yf79h62LQMN64T-fdQBjhgjUBXXGWVRAyqBMVKek_iHFtNTicyAhGB2RUjdtlSYXrtlJ1y9kFLUphxmC53IHAT8KKnTxWiEmMeGD0VFs7jmJg_HyRqA/https*3A*2F*2Furldefense.com*2Fv3*2F__https*3A*2Fdocs.google.com*2Fdocument*2Fd*2F15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw*2Fedit*3Fusp*3Dsharing__*3B*21*21PtGJab4*218c3Wua0ZIsCJQHOFJY_Hi171n9LVSKFXACciHXiBvFTWzNf8ZwMMPgLO40g-0oKSqBsyaCSdL8dpYhShiwllm-8sFIOs*24__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUl!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZM3Mf4-mP$" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com] [secure-web.cisco.com]</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span>D1a, D1b (Part 2): <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/secure-web.cisco.com/1subCSwwrqimEMVMn-UKhDQDtVB11pJDsEcTHLRPJmt3aieu0smxUoi5hMHj_oIdL1WYBC3fELaFhNaggiYVrz9G8_3Dbk1w6ozBYU4gdeIxEOCqQG3skpynDBM6o743OJ3ja8j-WAz-_fhkyzbeRXZf46O_Zdr1Y-FzMOup_cBiW6h5RkBN4g0bfrPpd-85JonoGmK8N9u4QEv3krSioU_n5fDJ2u8GtnpdFCm-1eJ4T4-jwjauSYjv3ZXtte9V_/https*3A*2F*2Furldefense.com*2Fv3*2F__https*3A*2Fdocs.google.com*2Fdocument*2Fd*2F1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw*2Fedit*3Fusp*3Dsharing__*3B*21*21PtGJab4*218c3Wua0ZIsCJQHOFJY_Hi171n9LVSKFXACciHXiBvFTWzNf8ZwMMPgLO40g-0oKSqBsyaCSdL8dpYhShiwllmxcb5Nox*24__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUl!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZM-WSbxFF$" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com] [secure-web.cisco.com]</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in">Both documents are<span style="color:black"> also posted on the wiki page here:<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/secure-web.cisco.com/12gAmWA9f-L3J1E-FfuWRHTwT1Awve1kIy7v1ecTEtezNzHKAw1BtRq08Xn9VA8ySVOCjyG-I5Rs8rI3KOqOdfBaN2UeXuEM31JO_Jb7tpj9NPyJwTk8Up77JMjIIfhRXr_mrQkDq1plktIOk8aSsox6vAy98ItRJ6tr6Y6S8xLlnrS6ucjAXk4leLF1I3AMrH4ZLpi86vrEBlLi84z1Yd8GUP3sWjGvuMrIV-rpY-L7Yweu2BqTw19H5UWshaoZF/https*3A*2F*2Furldefense.com*2Fv3*2F__https*3A*2Fsecure-web.cisco.com*2F1cLkZefuhXu_uH3vPKV-WqdDsF3bAzHFSuVy6oxj5LpOcybpNP4PyqXxwdzXfKE839qWUKiXL4Tac845XODFW9zsz-2JTwMygfJszPmKDuLAJup98RKhMiPeOff-kGqgdD4cKTDFD7L0B-9HvQoE_fGIjrTbxPFuTcTETGelO62_PEs9hq2SqTx0oyTv21YDmCba0hl6L1fsggbDua02iAwynycwUCw8SQ3boexaJTHDEqxtRlrTNkmGmyoakpGkF*2Fhttps*2A3A*2A2F*2A2Fcommunity.icann.org*2A2Fx*2A2FXwyHCg__*3BJSUlJSU*21*21PtGJab4*218c3Wua0ZIsCJQHOFJY_Hi171n9LVSKFXACciHXiBvFTWzNf8ZwMMPgLO40g-0oKSqBsyaCSdL8dpYhShiwllmxDegkHS*24__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJQ!!PtGJab4!80S0xtwSy1vg0CRcDG-5EcUEZcykfCia7PDwAxDlgY0DlpmJZIcSNoUDOsfcCc1HjO4Ht2p3-ZcRw4ZFqs6ZMwjEzpC6$" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/x/XwyHCg
 [secure-web.cisco.com] [secure-web.cisco.com]</a></span>. <u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black"> </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Following the agreed format, the draft<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>outcome<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>language includes the following components:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<u></u><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">        
</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><span style="color:black">Brief answer to the charter question<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<u></u><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">        
</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><span style="color:black">Recommendations and implementation guidance  </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<u></u><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">        
</span></span></span><u></u><span dir="LTR"></span><span style="color:black">Rationale for recommendations and implementation guidance</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in"><span style="color:black">Please note that for charter question
</span>D1b <span style="color:black">Part </span>1<span style="color:black"> (related to</span> the process by which an existing TLD registry operator seeks to activate variants<span style="color:black">) has not be addressed; it depends on
</span>the survey responses <span style="color:black">from the</span> Arabic/Chinese TLD ROs.  <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1in"><span style="color:black">Please provide any input/suggestion for the draft<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>outcome<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span>language on the <b><u>mailing list</u></b> by <b><u>Friday,</u></b></span><b><u>
 8 July</u></b><span style="color:black">. </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Best Regards,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Steve, Emily, Ariel<span class="gmail-m_-5884190191807715093apple-converted-space"> </span></span><u></u><u></u></p>
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