<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Hello Ariel, all,<br><br>I am submitting the ALAC Team's comments on their behalf:</div><div dir="ltr"><ul><li>A7: We have a suggestion for consideration - which is to explicitly encourage the CJK GPs to complete its work on the guidelines for a prohibitive list of Han characters in time to be implemented, post public comment, in time for the <font face="arial, sans-serif">next round. (see p. 15 of
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a>)</font></li><li><font face="arial, sans-serif">A7: Agree with need to rectify typo spotted by Dennis (see p. 15 of <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a>)</font></li><li><font face="arial, sans-serif">E5: Noting a couple of words as possibly missing from the last paragraph of the rationale for Rec 3.10 (see p. 5 of </font><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit</a>)</li></ul><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><br>We are reserving our comments on Rec 2.6 and IG x.x in light of the discussions in the EPDP Team Call yesterday (2 Feb), and also because the present call for comments to CQ D1b was limited to only Rec 2.9 and Rec 2.10 per your email of 19 Jan.<br><br><font color="#000000">Thanks,</font><br><font color="#000000">Justine</font><br><b><br></b></div></div></div><br></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, 3 Feb 2023 at 04:48, Tan Tanaka, Dennis via Gnso-epdp-idn-team <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Here are my observations:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<li>One potential minor sequence typo on P.15
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a><u></u><u></u></li><li>A follow-up comment on IG for Rec 2.6 on P.3
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit</a><u></u><u></u></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal">The rest looks good to me, consistent to our group deliberations.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Dennis<u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Thursday, February 2, 2023 at 9:04 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] [Gnso-epdp-idn-team] Reminder: Draft Output: Charter Questions A7, B4, D1b, E5, E6<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">Dear All, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">This is a reminder to kindly provide your input for the new draft text highlighted below by EOB tomorrow (Thursday, 2 February).
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">Thank you for your review!<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in">Ariel <u></u><u></u></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Thursday, January 19, 2023 at 12:17 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Draft Output: Charter Questions A7, B4, D1b, E5, E6<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">As mentioned by Donna during today’s call, please find the new batch of draft output text in response to the following charter questions. The draft text is included in the google docs as redlines.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<u></u><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span>·<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><u></u><b><span style="color:black">A7, Rec 1.14</span></b><span style="color:black">, pp.13-15:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><b><span style="color:black">B4, Recs 2.11-2.14</span></b><span style="color:black">, pp.3-5:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><b><span style="color:black">D1b, Recs 2.9-10</span></b><span style="color:black">, pp.2-3, 5-6:
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><i><span style="color:black">Note: the redlines on Recs 2.6 and Rec 2.xx require additional discussion by the EPDP Team in conjunction with the review of ICANN org input. Only the new recs 2.9-10 and their rationale are requested
to be reviewed this round. </span></i><span style="color:black"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><b><span style="color:black">E5, Recs 3.10-3.11</span></b><span style="color:black">, pp.3-6:
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit</a>
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</span></span></span><u></u><b><span style="color:black">E6, </span></b><span style="color:black">p.6:
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit</a> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in"><span style="color:black">All of these documents are<span> </span>also posted on the wiki page here:<span> </span><a href="https://secure-web.cisco.com/1kEahH40zPEL_zqVMFyRAGXMU3z8Rb92oNBwvnpXh5zCo5kEZPvmtAFgSCDvZ_tjb89_TiaJVQziQXhpolFaX-dIl40YoRiFNPOzs6dYuog2kQHjiq22UYgct538Xa8gsePXEC1IIkX6KY2BmFhCkHsrVJYP-5kRJUJxfWF8F0cmvxHjxbYS_-zBZC1IFq0Ti03m0_hQ7KHSGhs1LKwDv1RjlZELS1skGr_acOYcZ8xdCNAFlvILgcXEyEhmzoZm6MpRHFeemhbeBxsbkE_t8-5VueL7MkDP6UdWfQrxPp0mPB89g1UM0cRUubDt95YRu/https%3A%2F%2Fcommunity.icann.org%2Fx%2FXwyHCg" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/x/XwyHCg</a>.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Following the agreed format, the<span> </span>draft<span> </span>output<span> </span>language includes the following components:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="color:black">Brief answer to the charter question<span> </span><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="color:black">Recommendations and implementation guidance <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="color:black">Rationale for recommendations and implementation guidance <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Thank you for your review!</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Best Regards,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Ariel, Steve, Emily</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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