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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">I just wanted to give everyone a heads up that Justine and I have been reviewing documents over the weekend and today. I want to draw to your attention that there has been changes
 to documents posted by Ariel previously, most notably recommendation 1.2 under A3; and 2.25 and 2.29 under D1b.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">You may recall that during our discussions last week about application fees, we agreed that an applicant may be subject to additional fees across multiple rounds if the cumulative
 number of allocatable variants they apply for exceeds [x]. As I reviewed the recommendation language earlier today on this matter, I found it difficult to justify such a recommendation because an applicant for allocatable variant label in future rounds will
 still need to pay the base application fee. If they are only applying for one variant label and that variant label takes them above the threshold of [x] for a previously applied-for and delegated primary gTLD, it seems hard to justify what could be an automatic
 additional fee. I’ve made notes in the draft to that effect, but I would welcome input from others.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Kind regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Donna<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gnso-epdp-idn-team <gnso-epdp-idn-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Saturday, 1 April 2023 at 1:29 am<br>
<b>To: </b>gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org <gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-epdp-idn-team] Documents for Review / Input before Monday Meeting<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear All, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">In preparation for the Monday, 3 April meeting, please find below the documents for your review and input, especially the ones under
<b>1b, 2a, and 2b</b>. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Draft Sections of the Phase 1 Initial Report:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nD-a82Bx_JIYzWcZwBQcD61Aqn_yBPQMVr1l3EpZU_w/edit">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nD-a82Bx_JIYzWcZwBQcD61Aqn_yBPQMVr1l3EpZU_w/edit</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li><ol style="margin-top:0cm" start="1" type="a">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">You can find all draft sections of the Initial Report from the table of contents here
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span style="mso-list:Ignore"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">                                                              
</span>i.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Section 4, Annex C, and Annex E will be completed right before circulation of the full report to the EPDP Team
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span style="mso-list:Ignore"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">                                                            
</span>ii.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Staff plan to provide an overview of all these draft sections during the Monday meeting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Please specifically focus on the review of the following sections</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">, as EPDP Team’s
 input are expected be discussed on Monday: <o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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</span>i.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Section 3</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> Glossary
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span>ii.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Section 4
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Introduction section to the Preliminary Recommendations  <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span>iii.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Section 5</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> Differences Between EPDP-IDNs and ccPDP4 Preliminary Recommendations
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level4 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Leadership team may provide more substantive edits before the call
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Redline and highlighted draft text that needs to be closed off:  
<o:p></o:p></span></li><ol style="margin-top:0cm" start="1" type="a">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">A3 (pp.3-6):</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">D1b (pp.4-10):</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l6 level3 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span style="mso-list:Ignore"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">                                                              
</span>i.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Please focus on the review of the
<b>revised Rec 2.25 and 2.29</b>, and the <b>rationale for Rec 2.7, 2.24-2.27, and 2.29</b><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">B4 (Rec 2.13, p.4):
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span style="mso-list:Ignore"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">                                                              
</span>i.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">We missed to address the leadership comment during yesterday’s call
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">D8 (Rec 2.18, pp.17-18):
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span style="mso-list:Ignore"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">                                                              
</span>i.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">We missed to address the updated text during yesterday’s call
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l6 level2 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">A9 (Rec 1.12, p.17):
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">In addition, on 16 March 2023, the ICANN Board adopted a substantial portion of the SubPro PDP Outputs. The Outputs adopted by the ICANN Board include all the IDN recommendations in Topic 25 of
 the SubPro PDP Final Report. See details here: <a href="https://www.icann.org/en/board-activities-and-meetings/materials/approved-resolutions-regular-meeting-of-the-icann-board-16-03-2023-en">
https://www.icann.org/en/board-activities-and-meetings/materials/approved-resolutions-regular-meeting-of-the-icann-board-16-03-2023-en</a>. This should have minimum impact on the EPDP preliminary recommendations, as our recommendations are consistent or align
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you all for your efforts for the final push. Have a nice weekend!
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Ariel <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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