[Gnso-epdp-team] Section 4 of Temp Spec.
icann at ferdeline.com
Fri Aug 31 10:19:29 UTC 2018
I support the call for drafts to be made available at least 48 hours in advance of the call.
> On 31 Aug 2018, at 11:43, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com> wrote:
> Dear Kurt
> Dear All
> Thanks to those who have generously volunteered to look st Section 4 , in particular, certain sub paragraph of that section as well as corresponding parts of Appendix C
> Having said that I wish to emphasise that it is nit expected to receive new draft from scratch ( total redrafting ) but merely suggesting necessary amendments to the existing text to maintain the relative consistency with the initial documents
> In addition, the distinguished drafter need to take into account comments already received in TIRAGE from. Various stakeholder groups and ACs as well as those expressed during the discussion( transcriptions, recordings and chats
> Moreover, it is absolutely necessary to avoid overlapping, repetitions and double application as may contained in other sub paragraphs drafted by others.
> Some sort of coordination thus nay be required.
> These suggested drafts should possibly made available 48 hours before the Thursday ( 11th ) meeting which needs to be seen by Kurt before .
> Agenda of the next meeting should be limited to certain specific issue and not discussing various points at the same time.
> Attention of respectful drafters are drawn to the fact that several adjectives or terms used which are required to be clearly defined to facilitate the implementation of the suggested / modified sub paragraphs
> This was raised st various instances and raised by some sub teams
> Best regards
> Gnso-epdp-team mailing list
> Gnso-epdp-team at icann.org
More information about the Gnso-epdp-team