[Gnso-epdp-team] Some badly needed wording fixes as we finalize interim report

[Alex Deacon]

Milton, All,

I have to strongly object to Milton's suggestion that the text of Rec #2 be
updated as he suggests.   We debated the language for Purpose B (now
purpose 2 of Rec #1) for weeks if not months - reviewing many versions and
numerous iterations.    By the time we all got to Barcelona the current
language of purpose #2 is where we ended up and if you remember I expressed
the deep concern the IPC had with the language.

In order to move forward James B. suggested a compromise - resulting in
what is now Rec #2 - addressing our concern and allowing us to move
forward.  I greatly appreciated (and still appreciate) this pragmatic
suggestion from James and was encouraged that there was no objection from
any of us in the room.

The request that we change the language of Rec #2 essentially undoes this
compromise and puts us back in time many weeks.  A major change to the
intent of  a recommendation such as this is inappropriate and must not be
allowed.

Regards,
Alex


On Sat, Nov 17, 2018 at 9:14 PM Mueller, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu> wrote:

> All, I have been going through the Exec Summary of the interim report and
> have found some issues. Most of these are grammar or copy editing fixes
> that I hope we can accept without controversy. One of them has a
> substantive element, though.
>
>
> Footnote 2, page 4: “the EPDP Team anticipates taking a formal consensus
> call..”
>
> Shouldn’t this be “WILL take a formal consensus call…” To say
> "anticipates" sounds like we might not do so if it’s not convenient. We are
> required to take a consensus call
>
>
> Line 150-151: The wording of Preliminary Rec 2 is awkward and
> ungrammatical. It now reads:
>
>
> “The EPDP Team commits to develop and coordinate policy in the system for
> standardized access to non-public registration data portion of this EPDP
> regarding lawful access for legitimate third-party interests regarding
> abuse or intellectual property to data identified herein that is already
> collected.” This should be changed to:
>
>
> “The EPDP Team commits to develop and coordinate policy for disclosure of
> non-public registration data to third parties with legitimate interests.”
>
> Page 6, footnote 3. Delete. I thought we had agreed that after agreeing on
> Preliminary Agreement #3 that new policies on accuracy were out of scope.
>
>
> Page 6, footnote 4. This can be deleted, as the same text is included
> later on in page 7, lines 170-172
>
>
> Milton Mueller
>
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