[Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC

[Arasteh]

Dear Marika
Tks
Would we look at this initial report tomorrow?
Regards
Kavouss


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> On 21 Nov 2018, at 18:38, Margie Milam <margiemilam at fb.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi All-
> One change needed to Rec 8:  Please insert a footnote that reads: “The IPC and BC representatives on the EPDP are of the view that there should be no redactions of any data elements for legal entities.”
>  
> Margie
>  
> From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
> Date: Tuesday, November 20, 2018 at 11:47 AM
> To: "Gnso-epdp-team at icann.org" <Gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
> Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC
>  
> Dear EPDP Team,
>  
> We are pleased to share the proposed Initial Report for publication. Thank you again for attending and constructively contributing to the many hours of meetings over the past few days.
>  
> Redline – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4RX/view?usp=sharing
> Clean – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-kObk/view?usp=sharing
>  
> Note that in the redline version, you will find highlighted in yellow the updates proposed by Thomas for the responsibilities section. He also spotted some inconsistencies in the related tables that have been updated accordingly (as well as the related data elements workbooks sections). Please also note that per Monday’s discussion, the summary has been split out into an Executive Summary and Overview of Preliminary Recommendations.
>  
> For your convenience, you will also find attached the clean Word version. However, should you spot any minor issues or show stoppers, please use the line number reference in the pdf version to facilitate locating the language. Minor issues (e.g. grammatical, readability) can be sent to staff off list.
>  
> Due to internal ICANN processing times and deadlines we require feedback by 1800 UTC, tomorrow, 21 November. If you need additional time (not more than two hours), you must notify us before the 1800 cut off.  
>  
> Best regards,
>  
> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
>  
> Marika Konings
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> Email: marika.konings at icann.org  
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