[Gnso-epdp-team] RrSG edits -- Section 4.4

[Alex Deacon]

Thanks James and team for these redlines - having something concrete to
review and discuss is always a plus.

Based on a quick read (very late in the day) I have several concerns and
questions.     I look forward to your overview of these proposed updates
tomorrow and will make it a priority to take a closer look at the details
and consult with my team after the Thursday call.

Good night.

Alex


On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 4:43 PM James M. Bladel <jbladel at godaddy.com> wrote:

> ePDP Team –
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> In preparation for tomorrow’s call, please find attached a redline PDF of
> our edits to Section 4.4 of the Temp Spec, along with a slide/PDF with
> “clean” language for Kurt & Staff. Matt, Theo and I will walk through these
> edits, along with our rationale.
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> Look forward to our discussion tomorrow.
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> Thanks—
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> J.
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