[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - final version of section 3 of the Final Report

Marika Konings marika.konings at icann.org
Tue Aug 24 20:13:05 UTC 2021


Dear EPDP Team,

Please find attached for your review a clean and line-numbered version of section 3 of the Final Report. Please review this document and flag any “cannot live with” items of your group by Wednesday 24 August COB here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1knSKHXt0njWqXMmpiDKA76amycenNBUl/edit. Any minor edits (or those not rising to the level of “cannot live with” items) should be added to the second table.

As discussed during the call, this version includes at lines 232-241 proposed compromise language that aims to bring together the three different proposals that were put forward in relation to the guidance recommendation. If the proponents of these different proposals have concerns about this compromise language, they are encouraged to work together to put forward proposed edits that can be reviewed by the group. Similarly, some minor edits have been made to recommendation #1 (which was previously known as recommendation #3) that were shared with the small team for its consideration.

In addition, other minor updates have been made for consistency and clean up (to reflect the transition to a Final Report). For those interested in seeing the redline version, please let us know off-list and we can send you a copy of the redline version.

Best regards,

Caitlin, Berry and Marika
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