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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Also, the draft Initial Report does not reflect the proposed addition with respect to the EDPB letter of July 2018, which provides:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">"<i>The GDPR does not apply to the processing of personal data which concerns legal persons and in particular
undertakings established as legal persons, including the name and the form of the legal person and the contact details of the legal person</i>."
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">This should be added to the quote. As currently written, the quote from the EDPB letter is out of context.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">This comment was made within the “deadline” on 1 June 2021, but might have missed your attention.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Jan Janssen via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Reply to: </b>Jan Janssen <jjanssen@petillion.law><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, 3 June 2021 at 14:16<br>
<b>To: </b>STROUNGI Melina <Melina.STROUNGI@ec.europa.eu>, "Kapin, Laureen" <LKAPIN@ftc.gov>, Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org>, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>, Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>EPDP <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">All,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">I can only second that. I very much appreciate the time and efforts you put into this and the wish to speed up the process as much as possible. However,
that should not be a reason to rush into the public comment period with an initial report that contains parts that are unacceptable to working group members. If we proceed on this basis, it would only complicate the dynamic within the working group and make
the public comments less orderly and more difficult to manage. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">What are the consequences of a small delay compared to the impact of publishing a report that we know is unacceptable to WG members? Why has today’s
meeting been cancelled, while it could have been used to discuss these edits?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">With respect to the way in which Preliminary Rec #1 is written, the draft Initial Report does not accurately reflect the ‘level of consensus for the
recommendations presented in the Initial Report’, as required by Section 11 of the PDP Manual. This (and the other issues) must be sorted out before the Initial Report is published for public comments.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Jan Janssen</span><sup><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">*</span></sup><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">+32 486 48 39 94</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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– Avocats</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of STROUNGI Melina via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Reply to: </b>STROUNGI Melina <Melina.STROUNGI@ec.europa.eu><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, 3 June 2021 at 10:45<br>
<b>To: </b>"Kapin, Laureen" <LKAPIN@ftc.gov>, Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org>, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>, Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>EPDP <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Many thanks also from my side. I appreciate it was a difficult and time consuming task and thank you for the patience and efforts to find a middle ground.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Without wanting to delay the process, I have to agree with Brian’s remark that the way Preliminary Rec #1 is phrased is misleading. As it is at a prominent place
at the beginning of the document and it states conclusively that no changes are recommended it may give the wrong impression to the reader.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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I believe most of us would feel more comfortable if it was slightly rephrased to capture that “despite some groups believing that such changes are needed, no consensus was received on this point and thus no changes have been made, but we welcome public comments
on this point”.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I’m sorry; I know it must be frustrating as we want to publish this as soon as possible, but it is important to do it right. We have all devoted valuable time
in the process and it is important that the text reflects this effort and the different voices heard.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Melina
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kapin, Laureen via Gnso-epdp-team<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 3, 2021 5:35 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org>; Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>; Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Many thanks and appreciation to our excellent staff. I know that it was quite challenging to synthesize and organize our input for this closing lap of the initial report. I also realize that this work must have gobbled up weekend and holiday
time. I’m sure I speak for the entire team when I acknowledge how fortunate we are to have the support of such dedicated and skilled colleagues.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hoping you all get some well deserved time off! <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Laureen Kapin</b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b>From:</b> Caitlin Tubergen via Gnso-epdp-team <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date:</b> June 2, 2021 at 6:03:00 PM PDT<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> <b>[Gnso-epdp-team] Initial Report - final version + redline</b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear EPDP Team,<br>
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As Keith noted earlier, Leadership and the Staff Support Team have considered the input from our last meeting as well as suggested edits received via the feedback form and via the list and updated the Initial Report accordingly. The Support Staff Team has submitted
the Initial Report to the ICANN org internal team for publication.<br>
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Attached, you will find the final Initial Report as well as the redline version where you can see all of the changes.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
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Berry, Marika, and Caitlin<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - 2 June 2021.pdf><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - Redline - updated 2 June 2021.pdf><o:p></o:p></p>
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