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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#002060">Although what you describe about the rest of the report is accurate, I still think the omission of the word “anonymized” is simply a mistake that we should correct
 and to let it stand uncorrected will cause confusion.  Might you explain why there is resistance to correcting this simple error?  I suspect that PDP’s have published corrected versions before.    <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Laureen Kapin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Acting Assistant Director<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Division of Consumer Response and Operations<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Bureau of Consumer Protection<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Federal Trade Commission<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 15, 2021 4:36 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Becky Burr <becky.burr@board.icann.org>; Kapin, Laureen <LKAPIN@ftc.gov><br>
<b>Cc:</b> gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Question 5 to the Community - clarification needed<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please also note that the preceding section in the Initial Report defines these terms (note, there are also some footnotes that go with these definitions):<o:p></o:p></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      
</span></span></span><![endif]>"Registrant-based email contact", means “an email for all domains registered by a unique registrant [sponsored by a given Registrar] OR [across Registrars], which is intended to be pseudonymous<span class="s1">
</span>data when processed by non-contracted parties.<span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">      
</span></span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt">"Registration-based email contact", means “a separate single use email for each domain name registered by a unique registrant, which is intended to be anonymous data when processed by non-contracted
 parties.<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span class="apple-converted-space"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">We can make sure that a reference to these definitions is included in the public comment form to make sure that those that only look at the form have the appropriate context.
<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="p1"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Caitlin, Berry and Marika<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Becky Burr via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Reply to: </b>Becky Burr <becky.burr@board.icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, 15 June 2021 at 21:59<br>
<b>To: </b>"Kapin, Laureen" <LKAPIN@ftc.gov><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Question 5 to the Community - clarification needed<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">do you mean pseudonymized rather than anonymized?   <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Jun 15, 2021 at 3:36 PM Kapin, Laureen via Gnso-epdp-team <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In preparing for tomorrow’s presentation, I realized that Question 5 to the Community omits an important word, “anonymized.”
 We should correct this. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Here is the Question from the Initial Report:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">EPDP Team Question for Community Input #5</span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Does this guidance as written provide sufficient information and resources to Registrars and Registry Operators
<span style="color:black;background:yellow">who wish to publish a registrant- or registration-based email address</span>? If not, what is missing and why?
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Taken literally, this might leave the impression that the Recommendation is to publish a standard email address.  In fact, our
 deliberations involved the publication of an anonymized (or more precisely, pseudonymized) email address.  I request that we correct this oversight both so that our intention is clear and so that the public comments solicited focus on the real topic to consider
 – whether to publish some form of an anonymized email address.  </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-left:2.5pt"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I propose that we publish a corrected version of the Initial Report that inserts the word “anonymized” prior to “registrant-
 or registration-based email address” to correct this oversight.    </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Kind regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Laureen Kapin</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Acting Assistant Director</span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7030A0">Division of Consumer Response and Operations</span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
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