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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif">Hi, in reviewing the current text, I’ve discovered an error in line 156. I’ve included the surrounding text for context.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">The GDPR protects natural persons in relation to the processing of their personal data. The GDPR does not cover the processing of personal data which concerns legal persons and in particular undertakings
established as legal persons, including the name and the form of the legal person and the contact details of the legal person[Recital 14, GDPR]</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">The GDPR protects natural persons in relation to the processing of their personal data. The GDPR does not cover the processing of personal data which concerns legal persons and in particular undertakings
established as legal persons, including the name and the form of the legal person and the contact details of the legal person[Recital 14, GDPR]</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">This generally allows for
<b><i><u>disclosure</u></i></b> of legal persons’ data because it is outside the remit of GDPR; however, when processing legal persons’ data, Contracted Parties should put safeguards in place to ensure that personally identifying data about a natural person
is not disclosed within data marked as a legal person, as this is an example of information that
<i>is </i>within the scope of GDPR.</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">This generally allows for
<b><i><u>publication</u></i></b> of legal persons’ data because it is outside the remit of GDPR; however, when processing legal persons’ data, Contracted Parties should put safeguards in place to ensure that personally identifying data about a natural person
is not disclosed within data marked as a legal person, as this is an example of information that
<i>is </i>within the scope of GDPR.</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">For more information on this distinction, please refer to the
</span><u><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:blue">letter </span></u><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">from the European Data Protection Board, beginning on p. 4.</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">For more information on this distinction, please refer to the
</span><u><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:blue">letter </span></u><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">from the European Data Protection Board, beginning on p. 4.</span><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif">Thanks in advance for fixing this.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Mark Svancarek</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Principal Program Manager, Corporate Standards Group</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><a href="mailto:marksv@microsoft.com"><span style="color:#0563C1">marksv@microsoft.com</span></a></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#222222;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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