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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Hello Jeff,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thank you for the question. I did mean inserting a literal “comment” where your name is on the table, which will highlight your name and show the comment on the right.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">If you look at the current
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Iw5dya1WywzeuVBjBfSYDQ80MT-2wCJNPbeNl4kbzw/edit?usp=sharing">
Red Lines Table</a>, you’ll see I already added comments to some names, just for those of you who indicated your rationale (in discussion or chat) during our two calls this week. If you see your name is already highlighted and want to expand on your rationale,
you may add a new comment in the space next to your name, or simply reply to the comment that exists (and if you disagree at all with the existing comment on your name, please reply to it saying as such and I’ll remove it).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I hear you that the right-hand side of the document will (does) look unwieldy with all the comments. However, the alternative is everyone squeezing their comments into the thin
columns of the table itself, which then makes the table unwieldy, much longer, and would likely bury other participants’ names. By inserting “comments” instead, this enables anyone to simply click on your highlighted name and it will pull up your rationale,
add their own replies if relevant, while keeping the table itself short, clean, uniform, and free of rainbows of text.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I hope this makes sense, and of course if you have any other questions please let us know.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">Christian</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Jeff Neuman <jeff@jjnsolutions.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, April 28, 2023 at 8:42 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Christian Wheeler <christian.wheeler@icann.org>, "gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org" <gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] RE: FOR INPUT: Participant Red Lines Table<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Christian,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This may sound like an obvious question, but when you say you want us to add a comment on our rationale in the document, do you literally mean inserting a “comment” which would appear on the right of the screen, or do you mean writing the
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<p class="MsoNormal">I would note that comments that appear on the right of the screen will get unwieldy and be impossible to read if we all inserted actual “comments”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I hope that make sense.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Sincerely,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Jeff<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> gnso-gac-closed-generics <gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Christian Wheeler<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, April 24, 2023 12:41 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [gnso-gac-closed-generics] FOR INPUT: Participant Red Lines Table<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Hello all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thank you for engaging in today’s call, moving through the
<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1wtLVcyWhyrCaYl1iqlAncaIyrqpS--0aPCTjpwMue7I/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!4-zBORcB8lj_5CLsvGvtJLgMR9xHXZ7U2NzpnS_LVxQd35kmcH05CmHdFLeQNosEjL9qEw8WKNGwgZMQ-SOEXeiUcl2NgQ$">
Discussion Draft v2 [docs.google.com]</a> document. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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During today’s exercise, each of you used your raised hands reactions to indicate whether a particular framework element represents a “red line” for you (i.e. it must be included, or excluded, in order for you to stand behind the final framework) or whether
it presents strong concerns for you (i.e. not disagreement with the element itself, but concerns pertaining to the text, its placement, implementability, etc.). For the framework elements we discussed today, your various positions have been captured in this
<b><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/14Iw5dya1WywzeuVBjBfSYDQ80MT-2wCJNPbeNl4kbzw/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!4-zBORcB8lj_5CLsvGvtJLgMR9xHXZ7U2NzpnS_LVxQd35kmcH05CmHdFLeQNosEjL9qEw8WKNGwgZMQ-SOEXehRlDIo-g$">Participant
Red Lines Table [docs.google.com]</a></b> document, which can also be found in your
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Shared Drive [drive.google.com]</a>. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please review this
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Participant Red Lines Table [docs.google.com]</a> document, and where you see your name,
<u>add a comment providing your rationale</u> for your red line/concern. </span></b><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please provide your rationale as soon as possible.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">We also encourage you to look ahead at the entire table document, as we will continue today’s exercise for the remaining framework elements on our Wednesday call (4/26 at 20 UTC). Thank you all
for your participation, and if you have any questions please let us know.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">Kind Regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">Christian (</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">on behalf of Melissa Allgood and the staff team supporting this Facilitated Dialogue</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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