<html xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m="http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8">
<meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 15 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
{font-family:"Cambria Math";
panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
{font-family:Calibri;
panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
@font-face
{font-family:Consolas;
panose-1:2 11 6 9 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
{margin:0in;
margin-bottom:.0001pt;
font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
{mso-style-priority:99;
color:#0563C1;
text-decoration:underline;}
pre
{mso-style-priority:99;
mso-style-link:"HTML Preformatted Char";
margin:0in;
margin-bottom:.0001pt;
font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Courier New";}
p.MsoListParagraph, li.MsoListParagraph, div.MsoListParagraph
{mso-style-priority:34;
margin-top:0in;
margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;
margin-left:.5in;
margin-bottom:.0001pt;
font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;}
span.apple-converted-space
{mso-style-name:apple-converted-space;}
span.HTMLPreformattedChar
{mso-style-name:"HTML Preformatted Char";
mso-style-priority:99;
mso-style-link:"HTML Preformatted";
font-family:"Consolas",serif;}
span.EmailStyle24
{mso-style-type:personal-reply;
font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;
color:windowtext;}
.MsoChpDefault
{mso-style-type:export-only;
font-size:10.0pt;}
@page WordSection1
{size:8.5in 11.0in;
margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in;}
div.WordSection1
{page:WordSection1;}
/* List Definitions */
@list l0
{mso-list-id:1026753173;
mso-list-template-ids:-2083202814;}
@list l0:level1
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level2
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:1.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level3
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:1.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level4
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:2.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level5
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:2.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level6
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:3.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level7
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:3.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level8
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:4.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level9
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:;
mso-level-tab-stop:4.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l1
{mso-list-id:1712150139;
mso-list-template-ids:-783406202;}
@list l1:level1
{mso-level-tab-stop:.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level2
{mso-level-tab-stop:1.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level3
{mso-level-tab-stop:1.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level4
{mso-level-tab-stop:2.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level5
{mso-level-tab-stop:2.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level6
{mso-level-tab-stop:3.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level7
{mso-level-tab-stop:3.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level8
{mso-level-tab-stop:4.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l1:level9
{mso-level-tab-stop:4.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l2
{mso-list-id:1775202703;
mso-list-template-ids:-1325338890;}
@list l3
{mso-list-id:1936471196;
mso-list-template-ids:272380792;}
@list l3:level1
{mso-level-tab-stop:.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level2
{mso-level-tab-stop:1.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level3
{mso-level-tab-stop:1.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level4
{mso-level-tab-stop:2.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level5
{mso-level-tab-stop:2.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level6
{mso-level-tab-stop:3.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level7
{mso-level-tab-stop:3.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level8
{mso-level-tab-stop:4.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
@list l3:level9
{mso-level-tab-stop:4.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;}
ol
{margin-bottom:0in;}
ul
{margin-bottom:0in;}
--></style>
</head>
<body lang="EN-US" link="#0563C1" vlink="purple">
<div class="WordSection1">
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Hi Kathy,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Per your request, I’ve gone through the
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1smLEk84K113gSGEdM4b_o1VR0vMmJk4yIkmkxX4M6Zc/edit">
Remaining Red Lines</a> table and added which section/block each Red Line came from in the
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wtLVcyWhyrCaYl1iqlAncaIyrqpS--0aPCTjpwMue7I/edit?pli=1">
v2 document</a>. If you look just beneath the title of each topic (e.g. “<b><span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">Scoring</span></b>”) you will find the relevant information (“<i><span style="color:black">From
</span></i><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wtLVcyWhyrCaYl1iqlAncaIyrqpS--0aPCTjpwMue7I/edit?pli=1"><i><span style="color:#1155CC">v2 Discussion Draft</span></i></a><i><span style="color:black">: Section IV (Evaluation) #6”</span></i>). I hope this
helps.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">Kind regards,</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#080707">Christian</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">gnso-gac-closed-generics <gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Kathy Kleiman <Kathy@KathyKleiman.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, May 23, 2023 at 3:37 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org" <gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org>, Melissa Peters Allgood <melissa.allgood@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [gnso-gac-closed-generics] Closed Generics Asynchronous Work<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p>Hi Melissa, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Is there any way that you/Christian could go through #1, Remaining Red Lines Table, in the left column and identify which "Block" of our Framework the section came from, e.g.,
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>- Application, Evaluation or Post-delegation?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Out of context, things are looking a little duplicative and it may be because they are coming from different sections of our Framework. If you remember, it was my job, with Greg
<i>specifically to move some items from Evaluation to Application</i> (keeping them in Evaluation, but also giving the Applicant an opportunity to provide input directly on an issue to be evaluated by the Panel).
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>If we can see these section headings a little more clearly, it will provide some usual context for the sections we are discussing.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Best and tx, Kathy<o:p></o:p></p>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">On 5/22/2023 6:48 PM, Melissa Peters Allgood wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
<p class="MsoNormal">Hello again, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Many thanks again for the strong spirit of compromise shared by all during today’s call.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">This is the email chain that encapsulates remaining work, specifically:
<o:p></o:p></p>
<ol style="margin-top:0in" start="1" type="1">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l3 level1 lfo3"><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1smLEk84K113gSGEdM4b_o1VR0vMmJk4yIkmkxX4M6Zc/edit__;!!PtGJab4!83OPcACa9MYyzeaFCIsE3nfprdMk9E7AnuE0YDcnqoykfPNVehO6PyS9ayT3iMHHigwyjBxDtndJrAnVw9jAOeYWCPrAc5k$">Remaining
Red lines table [docs.google.com]</a> <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l3 level1 lfo3">Add notable concerns to
<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1u0Nb9_CJ-6R_ZF4bt9wbkzxLhMKu64aKY_vzS3QixgQ/edit__;!!PtGJab4!83OPcACa9MYyzeaFCIsE3nfprdMk9E7AnuE0YDcnqoykfPNVehO6PyS9ayT3iMHHigwyjBxDtndJrAnVw9jAOeYWAgn-Cok$">
v3 [docs.google.com]</a>. <o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any questions.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Melissa<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">gnso-gac-closed-generics
<a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org"><gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org></a> on behalf of Melissa Peters Allgood
<a href="mailto:melissa.allgood@icann.org"><melissa.allgood@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 22, 2023 at 8:08 AM<br>
<b>To: </b><a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org">"gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org"</a>
<a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org"><gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [gnso-gac-closed-generics] Closed Generics Asynchronous Work</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Hello, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Just a reminder to review and respond to the work detailed below. My thanks to those who have already done so.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">See you later today, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Melissa<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">gnso-gac-closed-generics
<a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org"><gnso-gac-closed-generics-bounces@icann.org></a> on behalf of Melissa Peters Allgood
<a href="mailto:melissa.allgood@icann.org"><melissa.allgood@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, May 18, 2023 at 2:50 PM<br>
<b>To: </b><a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org">"gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org"</a>
<a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org"><gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[gnso-gac-closed-generics] Closed Generics Asynchronous Work</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Hello all, </span>
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">While you have come a long way toward a draft framework, significant work remains with very little time to do it. I encourage you to view the work remaining through a lens of compromise.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1smLEk84K113gSGEdM4b_o1VR0vMmJk4yIkmkxX4M6Zc/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5OCuWteNnOZUXddYUk9Q7E0rVWeyo0c0Y2jQ1dTTnNSqPBoPDk_dYnCKqeN5DQQYg5JhqXO29H0fkvkQkToY8EouDljKSQYSpUk18Q$">Remaining
Red Lines [docs.google.com]</a></span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">This table reflects where each remaining red line issue currently stands. The group has recently worked on the vast majority of these and many issues within the table offer proposed compromise.
At this point, your positions on each issue are well known and there is no need to restate them. Instead, in this table I ask you find compromise with the language proposed OR offer possible solutions that meet your needs, as well as the needs of your colleagues.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Due to time constraints, it is now incumbent upon each of you to find strong support for your priority issues within the red line table in order for the issue to be included within the
<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1u0Nb9_CJ-6R_ZF4bt9wbkzxLhMKu64aKY_vzS3QixgQ/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5OCuWteNnOZUXddYUk9Q7E0rVWeyo0c0Y2jQ1dTTnNSqPBoPDk_dYnCKqeN5DQQYg5JhqXO29H0fkvkQkToY8EouDljKSQY6fzo4dg$">
Closed Generic Framework v3 document. [docs.google.com]</a> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Detailed Solutions to your “Notable Concerns” in v3 Document</span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">If you flagged specific text as a “notable concern” during our red line discussions (this was the final question I asked for each bit of text under
discussion) then please share proposed solutions to your concern(s)<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><u>via comments</u><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>in the<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1u0Nb9_CJ-6R_ZF4bt9wbkzxLhMKu64aKY_vzS3QixgQ/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5OCuWteNnOZUXddYUk9Q7E0rVWeyo0c0Y2jQ1dTTnNSqPBoPDk_dYnCKqeN5DQQYg5JhqXO29H0fkvkQkToY8EouDljKSQY6fzo4dg$" title="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u0Nb9_CJ-6R_ZF4bt9wbkzxLhMKu64aKY_vzS3QixgQ/edit">v3
document [docs.google.com]</a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>as soon as possible.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Minority Statements </span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">We haven’t seen strong support for this option.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><i><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Remaining Calls</span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<ol style="margin-top:0in" start="1" type="1">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="color:black;margin-left:0in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">22 May 2023 at 20:00 UTC</span> <o:p>
</o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="color:black;margin-left:0in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">24 May 2023 at 20:00 UTC</span> <o:p>
</o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Thank you for your continued hard work, especially asynchronously. The finish line is in sight.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">All the best,
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Melissa</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>gnso-gac-closed-generics mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre><a href="mailto:gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org">gnso-gac-closed-generics@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-gac-closed-generics">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-gac-closed-generics</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre><o:p> </o:p></pre>
<pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (<a href="https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy">https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy</a>) and the website Terms of Service (<a href="https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos">https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos</a>). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.<o:p></o:p></pre>
</blockquote>
</div>
</body>
</html>