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<p class="MsoNormal">Of course Maureen! Staff will accept the changes thus far and the comments that have been discussed and revert to a new clean document with today’s date.
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<p class="MsoNormal">Per Maureen’s helpful suggestion above, please wait for a new clean document dated today, which I will send to the list, before adding comments.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 1, 2023 at 12:07 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org>, "gnso-ggp-wg@icann.org" <gnso-ggp-wg@icann.org><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Would it be possible for the doc to be tidied up before we make additional comments? so we know what text we are currently working with.
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