[Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] IGO PDP -- suggested text for recommendation language tweaks, and manually generated redline

[George Kirikos]

Hi folks,

During the last call, Phil suggested a redline of proposed changes
would be desirable. I don't own software of my own that does this. I
also searched for online tools that do this, but couldn't find
anything suitable. But, I did attempt to create such "redline" text
manually, and it's attached as a PDP.

I started with Recommendation 2, since that was the 'easiest' (i.e.
adding 4 words, to restrict things definitively to "trademark and
service mark" rights).

For Recommendation 1, I reordered and rephrased the existing
recommendation slightly, for clarity. I also added the text that I
thought should be in a recommendation that no specific new DRP be
created for IGOs.

Since some would rather keep Recommendation 1 limited only to INGOs, I
then offered an alternative, namely adding it into Recommendation 3
instead.

Also, I'm not sure if folks noticed, but some text was deleted from
Recommendation 3, compared to what appeared in January 2017. I pointed
out phrases that we might want to put back, for clarity.

I also found a possible error in how Recommendation 3 was worded,
relative to the comparable text from January 2017. Back in January
2017, there was some text after a semi-colon (i.e. a separate
thought), that somehow got merged now into the prior text, without any
semi-colon. So, it doesn't make sense anymore to me. This stuff was
non-controversial (i.e. the assignee, licensee, agent procedural
guidance), but it kind of got mixed up with other text that was after
the semi-colon.

Sincerely,

George Kirikos
416-588-0266
http://www.leap.com/
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