[Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] IGO PDP -- suggested text for recommendation language tweaks, and manually generated redline

[Paul Keating]

If u send me the original and your changed version (without your manual redlines etc but with formatting) i can generate a redline using the compare feature of word. 

Sincerely,
Paul Keating, Esq.

> On Jun 20, 2018, at 2:25 AM, George Kirikos <icann at leap.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi folks,
> 
> During the last call, Phil suggested a redline of proposed changes
> would be desirable. I don't own software of my own that does this. I
> also searched for online tools that do this, but couldn't find
> anything suitable. But, I did attempt to create such "redline" text
> manually, and it's attached as a PDP.
> 
> I started with Recommendation 2, since that was the 'easiest' (i.e.
> adding 4 words, to restrict things definitively to "trademark and
> service mark" rights).
> 
> For Recommendation 1, I reordered and rephrased the existing
> recommendation slightly, for clarity. I also added the text that I
> thought should be in a recommendation that no specific new DRP be
> created for IGOs.
> 
> Since some would rather keep Recommendation 1 limited only to INGOs, I
> then offered an alternative, namely adding it into Recommendation 3
> instead.
> 
> Also, I'm not sure if folks noticed, but some text was deleted from
> Recommendation 3, compared to what appeared in January 2017. I pointed
> out phrases that we might want to put back, for clarity.
> 
> I also found a possible error in how Recommendation 3 was worded,
> relative to the comparable text from January 2017. Back in January
> 2017, there was some text after a semi-colon (i.e. a separate
> thought), that somehow got merged now into the prior text, without any
> semi-colon. So, it doesn't make sense anymore to me. This stuff was
> non-controversial (i.e. the assignee, licensee, agent procedural
> guidance), but it kind of got mixed up with other text that was after
> the semi-colon.
> 
> Sincerely,
> 
> George Kirikos
> 416-588-0266
> http://www.leap.com/
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