<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><font face="arial, sans-serif">As to the wraparound, I submit again the following suggestions (underlined):</font></span></p><p class="gmail-p2" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37);min-height:14px"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"></span><br></font></p><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><font face="arial, sans-serif">-First sentence of the Preamble: </font></span></p><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><br></font></span></p></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px"><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none">"This Initial Report is </span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none">the latest</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"> work that has been undertaken by the ICANN community to </span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none">consider and</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"> facilitate, </span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none">where appropriate</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none">, the protection of IGO identifiers in the domain name system (DNS)."</span></font></p></div></blockquote><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p2" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37);min-height:14px"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"></span><br></font></p><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><font face="arial, sans-serif">-Paragraph just prior to "1.2 Preliminary Recommendations":</font></span></p><p class="gmail-p1" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(37,37,37)"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><br></font></span></p></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px"><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p3" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none">"During the GNSO Council’s deliberations over the Final Report from the IGO-INGO Access to Curative Rights PDP, concerns were expressed as to whether Recommendation #5 will require a substantive modification to the UDRP and URS as well as result in a potential reduction of the existing level of curative protections currently available to IGOs – such as they are, i.e., at present IGOs must, </span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none">like every UDRP complainant</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none">, agree to the </span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none">“mutual jurisdiction provision”</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"> to be eligible to file a UDRP or URS case (the PDP had been chartered to determine <i>“whether to amend the UDRP and URS to allow access to and use of these mechanisms by IGOs and INGOs, </i></span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none"><i>and, if so in what respects </i></span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"><i>or whether a separate, narrowly-tailored dispute resolution procedure at the second level modeled on the UDRP and URS that takes into account the particular needs and specific circumstances of IGOs and INGOs should be developed</i></span><span class="gmail-s2" style="text-decoration-line:underline;font-kerning:none"><i>,” but its investigation led to the consensus conclusion that some IGOs had sucessfully utilized the existing rights protection mechanisms such as the UDRP, and as such, it did not amend the UDRP or URS, and thus further determined there was no need for new RPMs specifically for IGOs. The GNSO Council approved these consensus determinations.”</i>)</span><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none">. As a result, the Council decided that additional policy work needed to be done on the specific issue that Recommendation #5 had been intended to resolve."</span></font></p></div></blockquote><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p4" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);min-height:14px;letter-spacing:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><span class="gmail-s1" style="font-kerning:none"></span><br></font></p><p class="gmail-p5" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-weight:400;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;white-space:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif">-"2 Preliminary Recommendations", s</font><span style="font-family:arial,sans-serif">econd paragraph, beginning of first sentence:</span></p><p class="gmail-p5" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-weight:400;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;white-space:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><br></font></p></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px"><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p5" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-weight:400;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;white-space:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif">"This <u>may</u> present a challenge for <u>some</u> IGOs..."</font></p></div></blockquote><div dir="ltr"><p class="gmail-p5" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-weight:400;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;white-space:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif"><br></font></p><p class="gmail-p5" style="margin:0px;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-weight:400;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;white-space:normal"><font face="arial, sans-serif">Thanks!</font></p><br clear="all"><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><font color="#000000" face="Arial"><span style="font-size:13.6364px">Sincerely,</span></font></div><div dir="ltr"><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><font><font face="Arial"><font color="#0000F8" style="font-size:10pt;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Jay Chapman</span><b><br></b></font><br><b><font color="#000000" style="font-size:10pt"><a href="http://www.digimedia.com" target="_blank"><img src="https://docs.google.com/uc?export=download&id=0B_q-LxE2k9bPcVNkeDNXb2J6d0E&revid=0B_q-LxE2k9bPdHVhYmhxSE54QlkrR29QV0tNZk9tSk9pWm9JPQ" width="96" height="28"></a></font></b></font></font></span></span></span></span></span></div><div dir="ltr"><span style="font-size:10pt;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial">102 S. 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immediately notify me, delete this e-mail & all attachment(s).</span></font></span></span></span></span></span></font><br></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Sep 14, 2021 at 4:07 AM Chris Disspain via gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;"><blockquote type="cite"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;"><div>I shall look now at the ‘wraparound’.</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>A number of small amendments to the Exec Summary just picking up on the point in my email below. <div><br></div><div>Red line attached.<br><div>
<br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><font color="#797979" style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">Cheers,</span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">Chris Disspain</span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline"><a href="mailto:chris@disspain.uk" target="_blank">chris@disspain.uk</a></span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">+44 7880 642456</span></font><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;color:rgb(0,0,0)"></span><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"></span><span></span></div></div></div><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;"><div><div id="gmail-m_8744343231666698877AppleMailSignature"><span></span></div></div></div><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;"><div><div><span></span>
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<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On 14 Sep 2021, at 09:48, Chris Disspain <<a href="mailto:chris@disspain.uk" target="_blank">chris@disspain.uk</a>> wrote:</div><br><div><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;">Greetings All,<div><br></div><div>I have made a couple of small amendments to rec 4 (v) options 1 and 2 and the equivalent to rec 5 (iii).</div><div><br></div><div>I have in each case amended the first sentence from -</div><div><br></div><div>
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">'Where the registrant initiates court proceedings
and the result is that the court is unable to proceed...'</span></div><div><br></div><div>to -</div><div><br></div><div>'<span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">Where the registrant initiates court proceedings
and the result is that the court decides not to hear the merits of the case...'</span></div>
<div><br></div><div>I think this is clearer wording.</div><div><br></div><div>I have attached the red line with those amendments incorporated.</div><div><br></div><div>Other than that, I believe the document accurately captures where we are and the issues/questions on which we seek comment.</div><div><br></div><div>I shall look now at the ‘wraparound’.</div><div><br></div><div>As you know the intention is to start the process for getting this out for comment by 1600 UTC today. Please send any ‘red flags’ to the list by 1400 UTC if at all possible so that we can assess whether we can, in fact send it out or whether we need to delay and meet further to discuss this initial report.</div><div><br></div><div><div>
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<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On 13 Sep 2021, at 20:59, Mary Wong via gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br><div><div style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Dear all,<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Thank you for the productive and constructive discussion earlier today. We are attaching – in clean and redlined format - what we believe is final text for the preliminary recommendations and various options under consideration that will go into the Initial Report. We hope we have managed to capture all the suggestions, agreements and changes discussed on the call today. We have also accepted all but one of Alexandra’s suggestions (below); the only one that we have not changed, after some consideration, is the suggestion to move the text about providing information about applicable arbitral rules (in Recommendation #4 (ii) and correspondingly in #5(ii), as edited by Chris) to a footnote as we thought it might create confusion as to what is, and isn’t, “officially” a recommendation.<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">We will proceed to update the draft Initial Report with the comments that Alexandra and Brian sent via email. In the absence of any further comments, we will request that ICANN org’s Public Comment team publish the report, as updated, tomorrow as planned so that we can meet our goal of closing the 40-day Public Comment period by the time ICANN72 begins.<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Thank you all!<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Cheers<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Steve, Berry & Mary <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1pt;border-top-color:rgb(181,196,223);padding:3pt 0in 0in"><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:12pt">From:<span> </span></span></b><span style="font-size:12pt">"<a href="mailto:Alexandra.EXCOFFIER-NOSOV@oecd.org" target="_blank">Alexandra.EXCOFFIER-NOSOV@oecd.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:Alexandra.EXCOFFIER-NOSOV@oecd.org" target="_blank">Alexandra.EXCOFFIER-NOSOV@oecd.org</a>><br><b>Date:<span> </span></b>Monday, September 13, 2021 at 9:40 AM<br><b>To:<span> </span></b>Mary Wong <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org" target="_blank">mary.wong@icann.org</a>><br><b>Cc:<span> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject:<span> </span></b>[Ext] RE: [gnso-igo-wt] FOR DISCUSSION: Updated draft preliminary recommendations and options<u></u><u></u></span></div></div><div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">Dear Mary,</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">This looks quite good. See some comments below, mainly technical ones from our arbitration expert. OK also with Chris’ changes.</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">I have not had time to review the full report yet.</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">Regards,</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">Alexandra</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="border-style:none none solid;border-bottom-width:1pt;border-bottom-color:windowtext;padding:0in 0in 1pt"><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><ol start="1" type="1" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-top:0in"><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 3 -- suggest that “In relation to the UDRP/URS” be bolded and underline to show this is the same text for each para for the respective RPM (stylistic suggestion)</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.ii -- suggest “it agrees” instead of “they agree”</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.ii -- suggest moving the entire “The request shall include information regarding the applicable arbitral rules…” sentence to a footnote as we really want public comment on the main thrust of the recommendation.</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.iii -- suggest “agreed to arbitration” should be “filed a request for/notice of arbitration” (or equivalent) to match the text of Rec 4.iv</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.iv -- suggest to delete “If the UDRP provider receives notice that an arbitration proceeding has been initiated, it shall promptly inform both parties and the relevant registrar.” Because Rec 4.iii (and the UDRP) directs the applicable notice to the registrar, not the UDRP provider</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.v and vi -- suggest adding something like “In lieu of mutual agreement to arbitration as described in 4,I and 4.ii, where the registrant instead initiates…” for clarity</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.v.option 1 -- is “jurisdiction over” the right terminology? Could be discussed as lack of jurisdiction is a broader concept than lack of jurisdiction due to immunities. A priori, ok with both</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.v option 2 -- footnote 9 should appear at iii or iv</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 4.v option 2 -- should add notice to the UDRP provider (see note 5 above)</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec <a href="http://4.vi" target="_blank">4.vi</a> -- suggest deleting brackets and replace “and” with “or” or with “and/or”</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 6.ii -- should add<span> </span><b><u>e.g.</u></b><span> </span>-- “does not<span> </span><b><u>e.g.,</u></b><span> </span>have a satisfactory cause of action”</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 6.iii.d -- should add “in the discretion of the arbitral panel” (to match the UDRP)</span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rec 6.iii.d -- as agreed on our last call, the second sentence should be in brackets as an option</span><u></u><u></u></li></ol><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">In addition, the new footnote 8 does not match the recommendations, since it provides that the registrant can ask for arbitration at any time during the judicial process, while the recommendation only allows this at the conclusion of the process. Personally, my preference would be for the footnote, but that means that the recommendations should be modified. Also the footnote should indicate the options in their order (1, then 2).</span><u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><u></u><u></u></div><div><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1pt;border-top-color:rgb(225,225,225);padding:3pt 0in 0in"><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>From:</b><span> </span>gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org</a>><span> </span><b>On Behalf Of<span> </span></b>Mary Wong via gnso-igo-wt<br><b>Sent:</b><span> </span>09 September, 2021 9:47 PM<br><b>To:</b><span> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b><span> </span>[gnso-igo-wt] FOR DISCUSSION: Updated draft preliminary recommendations and options<u></u><u></u></div></div></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Dear all,<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Please find attached a clean, updated version of the draft preliminary recommendations that this group is attempting to finalize for Public Comment next week, as well as the URS process flow chart that was displayed during Tuesday’s call. We hope the revised text captures the agreements and feedback from this past Tuesday’s call. As previously, to avoid “competing” texts, please do not send a redline/markup of the document; instead, please feel free to post comments and questions to this list ahead of Monday’s call.<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">As you review the updated text, staff hopes that the following notes are helpful:<u></u><u></u></div><ul type="disc" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-top:0in"><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">We have combined the Mutual Jurisdiction exemption for the UDRP and URS into a single recommendation (which is now Recommendation #3).<u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">We have attempted to highlight the options under consideration even more by labeling them Option 1 and Option 2 (for the UDRP and URS, in what is now Recommendation #4 & #5, respectively.) We have also used yellow highlights in these square-bracketed options to indicate the differences between the two options in question.<u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">All other changes, updates and additions have been indicated via Comments balloons.<u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">We have clarified that the question regarding applicable law is not an option to mutual agreement but a possible additional step (in what is now Recommendation #6.)<u></u><u></u></li></ul><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">For the URS process flow chart, we plan on making any necessary updates once the EPDP team has agreed on the text of the recommendations, prior to insertion into the Initial Report.<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Staff is currently updating the draft Initial Report to reflect the latest changes and agreements. We will do our best to circulate an updated version as soon as feasible, prior to Monday’s call.<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"> <u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Thanks and cheers<u></u><u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Steve, Berry & Mary<u></u><u></u></div></div><span id="gmail-m_8744343231666698877cid:FB40C6809497DD44A76E9C4C68BF0AAE@pexch112.icann.org"><CLEAN Draft Preliminary Recommendations - IGO EPDP - 13 Sept 2021.docx></span><span id="gmail-m_8744343231666698877cid:3184870D65C9ED41A82C8AFCA798EB18@pexch112.icann.org"><Draft Preliminary Recommendations - IGO EPDP - 13 Sept 2021.docx></span><span 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