<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Mary will work on some wording that combines both of your points of view.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Meanwhile, I suggest we remove the chart since it appears to be problematic and, as I said yesterday, I believe our updated wording is now clearer.<br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 14 Sep 2021, at 13:54, Jay Chapman <<a href="mailto:jay@digimedia.com" class="">jay@digimedia.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="auto" class="">Good morning, Chris and everyone. </div><div dir="auto" class=""><br class=""></div><div dir="auto" class="">I do object to some of Alexandra's suggested edits in that particular sentence:</div><div dir="auto" class=""><br class=""></div><div dir="auto" class="">First, the suggested changes to the back half of this sentence water down the point that was put forth and that staff had accurately tried to state. To focus and be even more clear on the position, it should read as follows: </div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px" class=""><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class="">“…while other members thought that retaining the registrant’s ability to choose to go to court as an initial option was important to comply with the GNSO Council’s instructions (that the registrant obtain judicial review) and ensure fairness (that there would be a decision on the merits).”</span></font></div><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class=""><br class=""></span></font></div></blockquote><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class="">Second, the highlighting of the chart reaffirms its confusing and one-sided nature. S</span></font><span style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);color:rgb(49,49,49);font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;word-spacing:1px" class="">eeking neutrality in this report, why does the chart not indicate, for </span>example, that an IGO might lose at a particular point and not take things any further? Another example: the chart makes clear that there are several ways for an IGO to prevail, but only one direct way a registrant could prevail - if the IGO waives its immunity, which is not right or accurate (and the other, seemingly indirect way for a registrant to prevail is confusing as to where it originates from). </div><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" dir="auto" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class=""><br class=""></span></font></div><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" dir="auto" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class="">Finally, the edits also reemphasize the phrase “an unsuccessful attempt to invoke judicial consideration of its case” is also inappropriately leading, implying that a registrant’s protection of its domain from being taken is a hopeless folly. That's also not right or accurate. It's not an "attempt" - it's the registrant's right, and the registrant seeks a substantive determination, not just vague consideration. As such I suggest that phrase (here and anywhere else in the report) be changed to the following: </span></font></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px" class=""><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class="">"a court's decision to not hear the merits of its case"</span></font></div></blockquote><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" dir="auto" class=""><font style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:rgb(49,49,49)" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class=""><br class=""></span></font></div><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font color="#313131" face="Calibri Light, sans-serif" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class="">(I'll resubmit suggestions on the wraparound separately.)</span></font></div><div style="background-color:rgba(0,0,0,0);border-color:rgb(255,255,255)" class=""><font color="#313131" face="Calibri Light, sans-serif" class=""><span style="word-spacing:1px" class=""><br class=""></span></font></div></div></div></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><font face="Arial" class=""><span style="font-size:13.6364px" class="">Sincerely,</span></font></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" class=""><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" class=""><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" class=""><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" class=""><span style="border-collapse:separate;font-family:Helvetica;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;line-height:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" class=""><font class=""><font face="Arial" class=""><font color="#0000F8" style="font-size: 10pt;" class=""><span style="" class="">Jay Chapman</span></font><br class=""></font></font></span></span></span></span></span></div></div></div></div></div></div><br class=""></div></div></div></div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Sep 14, 2021 at 4:26 AM Chris Disspain via gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;" class="">Thank you Alex.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I agree that your wording accurately reflects the 2 sides of the discussion and so (subject to ant strong objections) suggest we incorporate it. <br class=""><div class="">
<br style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><font color="#797979" style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline" class="">Cheers,</span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline" class="">Chris Disspain</span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline" class=""><a href="mailto:chris@disspain.uk" target="_blank" class="">chris@disspain.uk</a></span><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><br style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline" class="">+44 7880 642456</span></font><br style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><br style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><span style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""></span><span style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""></span><span class=""><span id="cid:17be400a34eaa407671"><PastedGraphic-2.tiff></span></span>
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<div class=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 13 Sep 2021, at 17:37, Alexandra.EXCOFFIER-NOSOV--- via gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class=""><div class=""><div style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:13px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none" class=""><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class="">Dear Mary, all,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class="">As mentioned during the call, I’ve only reviewed the track changes in the full Initial Report document and have the following issue at the bottom of page 14. It currently reads :<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif" class="">“Some EPDP team members believe that preserving the option for a registrant to go to arbitration following an unsuccessful attempt to invoke judicial consideration of its case represents a “second bite at the apple”, while other members thought that retaining the registrant’s ability to choose to go to court as an initial option was important to ensure fairness as well as compliance with the GNSO Council’s instructions.”</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class="">This is quite leading language it makes it sounds that only the second option is fair, preserves the registrant’s right to go to court and is in line with GNSO instructions. I would propose rather:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif" class="">Some EPDP team members believe that preserving the option for a registrant to go to arbitration following an unsuccessful attempt to invoke judicial consideration of its case represents<span class=""> </span><span style="color:red" class="">an unfair, inefficient and costly<span class=""> </span></span>“second bite at the apple”<span class=""> </span><span style="color:red" class="">[see above chart],<span class=""> </span></span>while other members thought that retaining the registrant’s ability to choose to<span class=""> </span><span style="color:red" class="">go to arbitration following an unsuccessful attempt to invoke judicial consideration of its case</span><span class=""> </span>was important to ensure fairness<span class=""> </span><span style="color:red" class="">and to have a determination on the merits of the case. […]</span><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class="">Thank you,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class="">Alex<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div class=""><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1pt;border-top-color:rgb(225,225,225);padding:3pt 0cm 0cm" class=""><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><b class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" class=""><span class=""> </span>gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org</a>><span class=""> </span><b class="">On Behalf Of<span class=""> </span></b>BECKHAM Brian via gnso-igo-wt<br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class=""> </span>13 September, 2021 4:46 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class=""> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class=""> </span>Re: [gnso-igo-wt] FOR REVIEW: Updated Draft Initial Report (Re: FOR DISCUSSION: Updated draft preliminary recommendations and options)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div></div></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class="">Hi Mary – a few super minor textual catches:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class="">At 1.1 – two “the” and two periods.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class="">At 1.2.2 – extra space between “from” and “judicial”.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class="">Speak soon on the rest!<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class="">Brian<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div class=""><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1pt;border-top-color:rgb(225,225,225);padding:3pt 0cm 0cm" class=""><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><b class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" class=""><span class=""> </span>gnso-igo-wt <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org</a>><span class=""> </span><b class="">On Behalf Of<span class=""> </span></b>Mary Wong via gnso-igo-wt<br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class=""> </span>Saturday, September 11, 2021 1:06 AM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class=""> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class=""> </span>[gnso-igo-wt] FOR REVIEW: Updated Draft Initial Report (Re: FOR DISCUSSION: Updated draft preliminary recommendations and options)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div></div></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Hello again everyone,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Following up on the below, please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the latest version of the draft Initial Report. For ease of review, we’ve accepted most of the previous redlined comments (including from Brian’s markup of a few weeks ago) and highlighted new text where these came out of action items from the past two weeks of discussions. You’ll see also that we’ve not yet included the actual text of the draft recommendations in Section 2, as we understand that the main priority – especially on the call this coming Monday – is to finalize the recommendations text (including options for Public Comment.) Staff will therefore incorporate/paste the final text of the preliminary recommendations and options after Monday’s call into a finalized Initial Report that we can post for Public Comment.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">As such, for Monday’s call, we anticipate focusing initially on the draft recommendations text (as sent out yesterday, below).<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Thanks and cheers<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Steve, Berry & Mary<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1pt;border-top-color:rgb(181,196,223);padding:3pt 0cm 0cm" class=""><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><b class=""><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt" class="">From:<span class=""> </span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt" class="">Mary Wong <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank" class="">mary.wong@icann.org</a>><br class=""><b class="">Date:<span class=""> </span></b>Thursday, September 9, 2021 at 3:46 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:<span class=""> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank" class="">gnso-igo-wt@icann.org</a>><br class=""><b class="">Subject:<span class=""> </span></b>FOR DISCUSSION: Updated draft preliminary recommendations and options<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></div></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Dear all,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Please find attached a clean, updated version of the draft preliminary recommendations that this group is attempting to finalize for Public Comment next week, as well as the URS process flow chart that was displayed during Tuesday’s call. We hope the revised text captures the agreements and feedback from this past Tuesday’s call. As previously, to avoid “competing” texts, please do not send a redline/markup of the document; instead, please feel free to post comments and questions to this list ahead of Monday’s call.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">As you review the updated text, staff hopes that the following notes are helpful:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><ul type="disc" style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-top:0cm" class=""><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US" class="">We have combined the Mutual Jurisdiction exemption for the UDRP and URS into a single recommendation (which is now Recommendation #3).<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US" class="">We have attempted to highlight the options under consideration even more by labeling them Option 1 and Option 2 (for the UDRP and URS, in what is now Recommendation #4 & #5, respectively.) We have also used yellow highlights in these square-bracketed options to indicate the differences between the two options in question.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US" class="">All other changes, updates and additions have been indicated via Comments balloons.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US" class="">We have clarified that the question regarding applicable law is not an option to mutual agreement but a possible additional step (in what is now Recommendation #6.)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></li></ul><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">For the URS process flow chart, we plan on making any necessary updates once the EPDP team has agreed on the text of the recommendations, prior to insertion into the Initial Report.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></div><div style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" class=""><span lang="EN-US" class="">Staff is currently updating the draft Initial Report to reflect the latest changes and agreements. 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