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<b>Reply-To: </b>Chris Disspain <chris@disspain.uk><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, March 17, 2022 at 11:22<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-igo-wt@icann.org" <gnso-igo-wt@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[gnso-igo-wt] word-smithing the final report<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The edit document is available here - <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit__;!!PtGJab4!piM9Fd38ebEt0O-qn94UyeZtURX--6Lc5cmSiIGnXSMrpzd6DxZgjLrGkCXsk-yWYJmUSRQ$">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit
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<p class="MsoNormal">3) In the last column, “Proposed Revision”, please add your suggested edit or correction that you feel enhances or makes more clear the intent of the recommendation or supporting text without changing the intent. It should not be necessary
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<p class="MsoNormal">Whilst it would be great if we could have the suggested edits by 23.59 UTC today I acknowledge that some of you may not be able to respond by then. We will endeavour to add edits that come in over the weekend so that the document before
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>HOWEVER PLEASE NOTE: we all NOT be taking time on Monday during our zoom meeting to deal with word-smithing edits. There will be an opportunity next week after our meeting to run through a final time using the form linked above. </b><o:p></o:p></p>
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