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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear EPDP,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">One small update from the report sent out yesterday.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The leadership team received input from the RrSG regarding Proxy registrations and Recommendation #5 on Applicable law. You will see bracketed text on lines 390-392. Staff in consultation with EPDP leadership, it is proposed to amend that
bracketed text as follows (bold text):<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="color:black">Arbitration will be conducted in accordance with the law as mutually agreed by the parties. Where the parties cannot reach mutual agreement, the IGO Complainant shall elect either the law of the relevant registrar’s
principal office or the domain name holder's address as shown for the registration of the disputed domain name in the relevant registrar's Whois database at the time the complaint was submitted to the UDRP or URS provider.<b> Where the parties cannot reach
mutual agreement in a case where the registered domain name holder is a proxy service and the underlying registrant’s identity is disclosed as part of the UDRP or URS proceeding, the IGO Complainant shall elect either the law of the relevant registrar’s principal
office the law in the location of the underlying registrant. In all cases, </b>where neither law provides for a suitable cause of action, the arbitral tribunal shall make a determination as to the law to be applied in accordance with the applicable arbitral
rules.</span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The rationale for the change is that it does seem <span style="color:black">
appropriate in those cases where the beneficial registrant’s identity is disclosed as part of the UDRP or URS process to point to that registrant’s location instead of the proxy service’s (as the Registered Name Holder).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">If no objections, staff will include this in the next version of the report and we can review during next week’s call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mary, Steve, and B<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Berry Cobb<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Policy Development – Senior Program Manager<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mobile: +1 424 443 8960<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white">Phone: +1 202 570 7240</span><span style="color:#333333"><br>
<span style="background:white">Fax: +1 202 789 0104<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white">Twitter: @berrycobb<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white"><a href="https://www.icann.org/">www.icann.org</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">gnso-igo-wt <gnso-igo-wt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Berry Cobb via gnso-igo-wt <gnso-igo-wt@icann.org><br>
<b>Reply-To: </b>Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, March 21, 2022 at 20:45<br>
<b>To: </b>Chris Disspain via gnso-igo-wt <gnso-igo-wt@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[gnso-igo-wt] EPDP Final Report - Round 2 - Non-Substantive Edits<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear EPDP,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached a line-numbered version of the lastest draft Final Report. As noted on the call today and in parallel to the final phase of the consensus process, we are beginning round #2 of non-substantive edit proposals to the report.
Instructions and a link to the submission table are below.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please have any suggested revisions posted by <b><span style="color:red">23:59 UTC, 24 March 2022</span></b>. Staff will import the proposals and return an updated version by the next day the 25<sup>th</sup> to make ready for review at
our next meeting on the 28<sup>th</sup>. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Link to Input Table: <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit__;!!PtGJab4!q9lwWgdUEbc3Kupll5JS4z4eyEFlKUdkgb14OgtZN0jhLZ6oxd16wsJvKCOwB4gsc65tLus$">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit [docs.google.com]</a><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">*** If you do not have access, please request it. It will notify me and I will provide you with suggestion rights.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">**** If you do not get access in a timely manner to the google doc, please follow the instructions below and send your suggested edits to the full email list as an alternative.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b><u><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Instructions</span></u></b><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please note your name and the group you represent in the “Group Submitting” column.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">For the “Line Number(s)” column, denote the line numbers from the clean version of the PDF of the Final Report for which you want to suggest a revision. For sentences or paragraphs, it will be helpful to list the
full range of line numbers.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In the last column, “Proposed Revision”, please add your suggested edit or correction that you feel enhances or makes more clear the intent of the recommendation or supporting text without changing the intent. It
should not be necessary to quote the text from the report. In more complex proposals, a rationale statement should be included to help inform the EPDP on why the edit should be made.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">See the example in the first row. <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Round #</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">2<span style="color:black"> Edits</span> scope:
<u>FULL REPORT</u><span style="color:black">.</span></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline"><a href="https://community.icann.org/display/GNSOIWT/Final+Report"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1155CC">Link</span></a><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">
to revision history.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please let us know if you have any questions or need clarifications.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mary, Steve, and Berry<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Berry Cobb<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Policy Development – Senior Program Manager<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mobile: +1 424 443 8960<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="background:white">Fax: +1 202 789 0104<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white">Twitter: @berrycobb<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white"><a href="https://www.icann.org/">www.icann.org</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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