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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear EPDP,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached a line-numbered version of the lastest draft Final Report. As noted on the call today and in parallel to the final phase of the consensus process, we are beginning round #2 of non-substantive edit proposals to the report.
Instructions and a link to the submission table are below.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please have any suggested revisions posted by <b><span style="color:red">23:59 UTC, 24 March 2022</span></b>. Staff will import the proposals and return an updated version by the next day the 25<sup>th</sup> to make ready for review at
our next meeting on the 28<sup>th</sup>. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Link to Input Table: <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit__;!!PtGJab4!q9lwWgdUEbc3Kupll5JS4z4eyEFlKUdkgb14OgtZN0jhLZ6oxd16wsJvKCOwB4gsc65tLus$">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit [docs.google.com]</a><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">*** If you do not have access, please request it. It will notify me and I will provide you with suggestion rights.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">**** If you do not get access in a timely manner to the google doc, please follow the instructions below and send your suggested edits to the full email list as an alternative.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b><u><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Instructions</span></u></b><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please note your name and the group you represent in the “Group Submitting” column.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">For the “Line Number(s)” column, denote the line numbers from the clean version of the PDF of the Final Report for which you want to suggest a revision. For sentences or paragraphs, it will be helpful to list the
full range of line numbers.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In the last column, “Proposed Revision”, please add your suggested edit or correction that you feel enhances or makes more clear the intent of the recommendation or supporting text without changing the intent. It
should not be necessary to quote the text from the report. In more complex proposals, a rationale statement should be included to help inform the EPDP on why the edit should be made.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline">
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">See the example in the first row. <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Round #</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">2<span style="color:black"> Edits</span> scope:
<u>FULL REPORT</u><span style="color:black">.</span></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3;vertical-align:baseline"><a href="https://community.icann.org/display/GNSOIWT/Final+Report"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1155CC">Link</span></a><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">
to revision history.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please let us know if you have any questions or need clarifications.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mary, Steve, and Berry<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Berry Cobb<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Policy Development – Senior Program Manager<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mobile: +1 424 443 8960<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white">Phone: +1 202 570 7240</span><span style="color:#333333"><br>
<span style="background:white">Fax: +1 202 789 0104<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white">Twitter: @berrycobb<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#333333;background:white"><a href="https://www.icann.org/">www.icann.org</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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