[Gnso-newgtld-wg] Section 1.12 - Comments/suggestions

Rosette, Kristina rosettek at amazon.com
Mon Apr 16 13:29:28 UTC 2018


All,

I've listed below some additional comments and suggestions on Section 1.12.


1.       1.12.1.e, first bullet:  Need citation to statement that delegation deadline put into place to avoid squatting and warehousing

2.       1.12.1.f, 3rd sentence:  Even if terms aren't precisely defined, report should provide whatever definitions are being relied upon.

3.       1.12.1.f, para 2, 4th & 5th sentences:  Confusing to have "use" in quotations.  Juxtaposition of sentences 4 and 5 (not clear what use is, but use satisfied) is confusing.

4.       1.12.1.f, para 3, 3rd sentence:  Need to explain what constitutes "actively used" - especially given statements in preceding paragraph.

5.       1.12.1.f, para 5, 2nd sentence:  It's a stretch to refer to targeted deadlines as SLAs (although I wish they had been).

6.       1.12.1.f, para 6, 3rd sentence:  "in relation to this issue" is unclear.  Identify the issue (e.g., in relation to X).

7.       1.12.1.f, para 6, 4th sentence:  words missing after support - the view that?

8.       1.12.3.b, para 2:  need citations to RA provisions

9.       1.12.3.c, 2nd sentence:  replace "granular" with "detailed" and/or "more specific"

10.   1.12.3.e, question 1:  need to provide basis for referring to application statements as "representations and/or commitments"; also, second-to-last question should be revised to ask commenter to explain why they've identified any specific representations and/or commitments.

11.   1.12.3.e, question 2:  Need to ask "How will the proposed mechanisms effectively address these issues"?

12.   1.12.3.f, para 1, 3rd sentence:  Base Registry Agreement (for consistency)

13.   1.12.3.f, para 2: revise 4th bullet - Should representations made by the applicant be integrated into the Registry Agreement going forward and, if so, why and how?

14.   1.12.3.f, para 4, 2nd sentence:  insert ", non-confidential" between "additional" and "data"

Talk to everyone later.

K


Kristina Rosette
Senior Corporate Counsel, IP - Domains
rosettek at amazon.com<mailto:rosettek at amazon.com>



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