[Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble

Thu Jun 21 16:20:22 UTC 2018

Anne,

To be honest, the Annexes which are going to literally copy word from word from the main body of the document (like the preliminary recommendations and the things we are soliciting for public comment), we were not planning to do a draft of for version control reasons.  We didn’t want to have a separate Annex now, then have to fix changes in both versions if there are changes to either of those.

I will discuss with staff today to see what we can do.

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Thanks Jeff. Is there a particular time when we will have the complete, entire redlined draft report including Annexes with the all the questions in one document?  (That would be handy.)

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From: Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Jeff Neuman
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Subject: Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble

Thanks Steve.

Just to clarify what Steve has said below, when he refers to the”remaining elements in the Initial Report” he is referring to purely administrative items such as (a) insertion of the participant list in the applicable Annex, (b) copying the preliminary recommendations and the questions for community input and putting them in the appropriate Annexes, (c) ensuring that the font is the same throughout the report, (d) ensuring consistency with how we refer to the Applicant Guidebook, the 2007 GNSO Final Report, and other terms, etc.

He is not referring to substantive sections that have to be written which would need Working Group review.  Thanks.

Best regards,

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On Jun 20, 2018, at 1:30 AM, Steve Chan <steve.chan at icann.org<mailto:steve.chan at icann.org>> wrote:
Dear WG Members,

As noted by Jeff a short while ago, the red-lined excerpts have all been made available on the Wiki here: https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB. On this page, you will a full set of red-lined excerpts, all sections in a single document. You will also find extracts of each section as well. All of these documents are available in Word and PDF.

Included as well on this page is the latest version of the remaining elements of the Initial Report, which includes edits suggested by WG members to the Preamble. The next steps from the staff side are to complete some of the remaining elements in the Initial Report, as well as to begin integrating the excerpts into the report.

If you have any questions, please do let us know.

Best,
Steve, Emily, and Julie

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