[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] before removing...

[Mary Wong]

Hi Kathy - we will circulate a clean as well as ³redlined² version of the
proposed final Disclosure Framework. The ³without human review² phrase
refers to the automation language; it was suggested last week that this
should be removed, along with the suggestion that the entire paragraph on
automation be moved further up in the document - I hope this helps!

Cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
Email: mary.wong at icann.org







-----Original Message-----
From: Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com>
Date: Tuesday, April 14, 2015 at 11:02
To: Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org"
<gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org>
Subject: before removing...

>Hi Mary,
>The following comment in chat flashed by at the end:
>"Mary: We will remove the "human review" phrase unless there are
>objections/suggestions."
>
>Sorry, but I have to object because I am missing the context. Could you
>kindly post the old paragraph and the new paragraph and we'll all take a
>close look?
>
>Best and tx,
>Kathy
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