[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Agenda for WG call on 28 April

[Metalitz, Steven]

Thanks Mary, for getting the draft Initial Report out to us in such a timely fashion.

I echo your call for prompt feedback from the WG and in that vein suggest two minor tweaks to clarify what might otherwise appear to be discrepancies in the document.  Please see attached.

Also, for clarity, I recommend that footnote 1 in the executive summary excerpt (I believe this is footnote 8 in the consolidated redline document) be revised to read as follows:

"Square brackets in this document generally indicate alternative formulations on the same topic that are under consideration by the Working Group.  Commenters are encouraged to specify which formulation they prefer, and why."

(I was concerned that the language Mary circulated might suggest to some people that unbracketed text is not "still under consideration," i.e., not subject to public comment.  For ready reference, that language was:  [Where specific language, options or recommendations are still under consideration by the WG, these have been indicated by the use of square brackets around the relevant text].)

Steve Metalitz




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Sent: Monday, April 27, 2015 1:38 PM
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Subject: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Agenda for WG call on 28 April

Dear WG members,

Here is the proposed agenda for our next call, scheduled for Tuesday 28 April 2015:

  1.  Roll call/updates to SOI
  2.  Review draft Initial Report (circulated on 23 April and posted also at https://community.icann.org/x/TYsQAw)
  3.  Next steps
Thanks to Holly for sending in her thoughts on the 23 April document; our understanding is that other WG members may also be circulating comments prior to the call tomorrow. Please feel free to do so to enable other members to review your comments as much in advance as possible.

Thanks and cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
Email: mary.wong at icann.org<mailto:mary.wong at icann.org>



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