[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Markup ("redline") of WG Final Report

[Kathy Kleiman]

Hi Mary,
I hope you received the edits in my most recent email. If not, please 
let me know.
Tx,
Kathy

On 12/7/2015 9:01 PM, Mary Wong wrote:
> Hi Kathy - would you mind indicating what the missing piece is? It may 
> be easier to figure out what happened that way at this stage - thanks!
>
> Cheers
> Mary
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On Dec 7, 2015, at 20:50, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com 
> <mailto:kathy at kathykleiman.com>> wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>> I am sorry to share that the language Chris introduced, and that the 
>> WG accepted, does not appear to have made it into the final version 
>> despite circulation of this language. I trust we can correct this, 
>> and I am working on line edits.  I also support Holly's changes.
>> Best,
>> Kathy
>>
>>
>> On 12/7/2015 11:23 AM, Mary Wong wrote:
>>> Hello everyone,
>>>
>>> Please find attached the marked-up version of our Final Report, 
>>> showing the changes that were made to the last version circulated on 
>>> 20 November. As noted previously, the changes are those that were 
>>> distributed by email on 1 December as reflecting the new language of 
>>> certain WG recommendations in the Executive Summary of the Final 
>>> Report (and with corresponding language changes made to Section 7 
>>> where these recommendations are repeated verbatim).
>>>
>>> We are continuing to proof-read and format the final clean document, 
>>> so there may still be a few minor typos and formatting/spacing 
>>> issues in the attached. However, the co-chairs thought it would be 
>>> useful for everyone to get to see all the changes that have been 
>>> made to the Final Report in a single document prior to the deadline 
>>> later today.
>>>
>>> Thanks and cheers
>>> Mary
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Mary Wong
>>> Senior Policy Director
>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
>>> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
>>> Telephone: +1-603-5744889
>>>
>>>
>>>
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