[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Updated Draft Reporr (Re: Proposed agenda - PPSAI WG meeting0

[Holly Raiche]

Folks

Just a quick comment on language in section 1.3.1 - Point 15.  the use of the term reveal in the context of ‘publication’ is confusing.  This WG is using the term reveal in a quite specific way - i.e., to make known to the party making the query.  Publication is, as I understand it, to the public at large.  So please, let’s not use the same terms in the same sentence.

For publication - maybe making the information publicly available, or something like that

Holly
On 27 Jan 2015, at 2:26 am, Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org> wrote:

> <DRAFT WG Initial Report - updated 21 Jan 2015.doc>