[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Updated Draft Reporr (Re: Proposed agenda - PPSAI WG meeting0
Kathy Kleiman
kathy at kathykleiman.com
Tue Jan 27 14:54:22 UTC 2015
Hi All,
I think Holly is exactly right. The use of "reveal" to define "reveal"
is a bit confusing. How about a set of edits such as those [1.3.1 #15]?
Best,
Kathy
:
·“Publication” means the [DEL: reveal] [ADD: announcement] of a person’s
(i.e. the licensee or beneficial owner of a registered domain name)
identity/contact details in the WHOIS system [ADD: to the public].
·“Disclosure” means the [DEL: reveal][ADD: sharing] of a person’s (i.e.
the licensee or beneficial owner of a registered domain name)
identity/contact details to a third party requestor without Publication
in the WHOIS system.
:
> Folks
>
> Just a quick comment on language in section 1.3.1 - Point 15. the use of the term reveal in the context of ‘publication’ is confusing. This WG is using the term reveal in a quite specific way - i.e., to make known to the party making the query. Publication is, as I understand it, to the public at large. So please, let’s not use the same terms in the same sentence.
>
> For publication - maybe making the information publicly available, or something like that
>
> Holly
> On 27 Jan 2015, at 2:26 am, Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org> wrote:
>
>> <DRAFT WG Initial Report - updated 21 Jan 2015.doc>
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